GRE写作优秀实例：现代摄像机和印刷术
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="video">video</span> <span word="camera">camera</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accurate">accurate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span> <span word="record">record</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="documentation">documentation</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="records">records</span>.</p><p> 摄像机可以通过如此精确而有力的记录手段来再现当代生活，因此它已经代替书面记录成为了一种更重要的记录手段。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="video">video</span> <span word="camera">camera</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="accurate">accurate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="convincing">convincing</span> <span word="record">record</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="contemporary">contemporary</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="form">form</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="documentation">documentation</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="records">records</span>.There have been many methods of documenting in the history of human, from carved ancient pottery to sheepskin documents, of which the video camera may be the newest form with certain superiorities and inferiorities to written records. The advantages of video camera certainly make it an important form of documentation, but not to the extent of being more essential than written records due to its disadvantages.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="video">video</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="interpreted">interpreted</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="series">series</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span> <span word="associated">associated</span> <span word="along">along</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="records">records</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="considered">considered</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="descriptions">descriptions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="pictures">pictures</span>.<span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="undoubtedly">undoubtedly</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="video">video</span> <span word="contains">contains</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="records">records</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="video">video</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="clearly">clearly</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="subtle">subtle</span> <span word="details">details</span>.<span word="Merely">Merely</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="television">television</span> <span word="set">set</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="easily">easily</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="happenings">happenings</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Olympic">Olympic</span> <span word="Games">Games</span>, <span word="comfortably">comfortably</span> <span word="sitting">sitting</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sofa">sofa</span>, <span word="needless">needless</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spot">spot</span>.</p>
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