GRE备考资料：Issue写作范文详细解析(17)
<p> <span word="Issue">Issue</span></p><p> <span word="Humanity">Humanity</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="century">century</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="Technological">Technological</span> <span word="innovations">innovations</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="better">better</span>. <span word="War">War</span>, <span word="violence">violence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Technology">Technology</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span>.</p><p> <span word="Sample">Sample</span> <span word="Essay">Essay</span></p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="statement">statement</span> <span word="turns">turns</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="meant">meant</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="overall">overall</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="third">third</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sure">sure</span>, <span word="war">war</span>, <span word="violence">violence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="mankind">mankind</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="worldwide">worldwide</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="thanks">thanks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="advances">advances</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="technology">technology</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="communication">communication</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="depending">depending</span> <span word="upon">upon</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="definition">definition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="condition">condition</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="appear">appear</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="incorrect">incorrect</span> <span word="statement">statement</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="phrase">phrase</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="sentence">sentence</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="defined">defined</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="defines">defines</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="elimination">elimination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="death">death</span>, <span word="war">war</span>, <span word="violence">violence</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="perhaps">perhaps</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="stated">stated</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="humankind">humankind</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="improvement">improvement</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="years">years</span>. <span word="People">People</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="dying">dying</span>, <span word="wars">wars</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="fought">fought</span>, <span word="violence">violence</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="present">present</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="everywhere">everywhere</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="poverty">poverty</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="term">term</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="defined">defined</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="elimination">elimination</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="reduction">reduction</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="century">century</span>. <span word="Life">Life</span> <span word="expectancies">expectancies</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improvements">improvements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="medicine">medicine</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scientific">scientific</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="body">body</span>. <span word="War">War</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="violence">violence</span>, <span word="although">although</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="present">present</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="confined">confined</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="global">global</span> <span word="wars">wars</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="World">World</span> <span word="Wars">Wars</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="II">II</span>. <span word="Poverty">Poverty</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="reduced">reduced</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="improvements">improvements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="formerly">formerly</span> <span word="impoverished">impoverished</span> <span word="nations">nations</span>. <span word="Very">Very</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="areas">areas</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="hundred">hundred</span> <span word="years">years</span>.</p>
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