牛人GRE作文模考5分范例
<p> <span word="argument">argument</span>模考原文</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>:<span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="reasoned">reasoned</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>.</p><p> <span word="Six">Six</span> <span word="months">months</span> <span word="ago">ago</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span> <span word="traveling">traveling</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="highways">highways</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="miles">miles</span> <span word="per">per</span> <span word="hour">hour</span>. <span word="Since">Since</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="effect">effect</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="by">by</span> 15 <span word="percent">percent</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Elmsford">Elmsford</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="neighboring">neighboring</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span>, <span word="remained">remained</span> <span word="unchanged">unchanged</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="declined">declined</span> <span word="slightly">slightly</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="six">six</span>-<span word="month">month</span> <span word="period">period</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="if">if</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="highways">highways</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="campaign">campaign</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="Forestvilles">Forestvilles</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span>.</p><p> <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="Answer">Answer</span> </p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="problematic">problematic</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="committed">committed</span> <span word="several">several</span> <span word="serious">serious</span> <span word="fallacies">fallacies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="reasoning">reasoning</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="his">his</span>/<span word="her">her</span> <span word="recommendation">recommendation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="unwarranted">unwarranted</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="with">with</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="fails">fails</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="distinction">distinction</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highways">highways</span>. <span word="He">He</span>/<span word="She">She</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="mentions">mentions</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="automobile">automobile</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> 15 <span word="percent">percent</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highways">highways</span> <span word="increased">increased</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="entirely">entirely</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="highways">highways</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Forestville">Forestville</span> <span word="rocketed">rocketed</span> <span word="dramatically">dramatically</span>. <span word="Consequently">Consequently</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="author">author</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="conclude">conclude</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="change">change</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="limit">limit</span>.</p>
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