2011gre issue写作优秀实例：教育之分数
<p> 新<span word="gre">gre</span>作文写作考察考生完成题目过程中是否能够融合批判性思维和分析写作能力，以下是<span word="gre">gre</span>考试写作部分<span word="issue">issue</span>的优秀写作实例，通过这些优秀范文或是习作，考生可以借鉴里面的短语、句子或思路，给自己的写作找一些思路和灵感。</p><p> 题目：</p><p> <span word="Competition">Competition</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="limits">limits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>.</p><p> 追求高分严重的限制了教育各阶段的学习质量。</p><p> 正文：</p><p> <span word="How">How</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="examination">examination</span>?, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span> <span word="asked">asked</span> <span word="word">word</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="custodians">custodians</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="worry">worry</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="emphasis">emphasis</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="harm">harm</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span>, <span word="pursuing">pursuing</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="blemish">blemish</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="helps">helps</span> <span word="boost">boost</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="grasp">grasp</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="firmly">firmly</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="thirst">thirst</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="success">success</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="everyones">everyones</span> <span word="humanity">humanity</span>.<span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proverb">proverb</span> <span word="goes">goes</span>, <span word="No">No</span> <span word="pains">pains</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="gains">gains</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="getting">getting</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="satisfying">satisfying</span> <span word="score">score</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="review">review</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="texts">texts</span> <span word="frequently">frequently</span>, <span word="remember">remember</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="deep">deep</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="mind">mind</span>, <span word="enlarge">enlarge</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="learning">learning</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>,<span word="especially">especially</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="examinations">examinations</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="coming">coming</span>. <span word="All">All</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="efforts">efforts</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="aims">aims</span> <span word="are">are</span>, <span word="will">will</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="corresponding">corresponding</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="back">back</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="actuate">actuate</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="ameliorate">ameliorate</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="didactics">didactics</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="adapt">adapt</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="changeable">changeable</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="make">make</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="lessons">lessons</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="concise">concise</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="attract">attract</span> <span word="pupils">pupils</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="renewal">renewal</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conception">conception</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="updating">updating</span> <span word="pace">pace</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="men">men</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exertion">exertion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="sides">sides</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="pursuit">pursuit</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="grades">grades</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bad">bad</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>.</p>
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