GRE写作：Issue主题范文及评析2
<p> 综合广大<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考生的需求，为大家整理出以下<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考试中<span word="Issue">Issue</span>主题范文及评析，希望能给广大<span word="GRE">GRE</span>考生在写作上带来帮助!</p><p> <span word="Environmental">Environmental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="joint">joint</span> <span word="efferct">efferct</span> <span word="amoung">amoung</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="together">together</span>. <span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="extended">extended</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="effert">effert</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="them">them</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="return">return</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="happens">happens</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="shortage">shortage</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="natural">natural</span> <span word="resouses">resouses</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="supply">supply</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="resouces">resouces</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="demand">demand</span> <span word="remains">remains</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="increased">increased</span> <span word="presure">presure</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="resouces">resouces</span> <span word="remain">remain</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fighting">fighting</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="whats">whats</span> <span word="left">left</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>.</p><p> <span word="To">To</span> <span word="solve">solve</span> <span word="this">this</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="reaches">reaches</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="state">state</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="return">return</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="yet">yet</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="degree">degree</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span>. <span word="At">At</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="worry">worry</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="immediatly">immediatly</span> <span word="effect">effect</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="remidy">remidy</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>.</p><p> 评价</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="response">response</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="seriously">seriously</span> <span word="flawed">flawed</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="essays">essays</span> <span word="strongest">strongest</span> <span word="feature">feature</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="fairly">fairly</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="position">position</span>: <span word="it">it</span> <span word="agrees">agrees</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="claim">claim</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="require">require</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="presents">presents</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="scenario">scenario</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="happen">happen</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="cooperation">cooperation</span> -- <span word="conflict">conflict</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="diminishing">diminishing</span> <span word="resources">resources</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="adequately">adequately</span> <span word="developed">developed</span>. <span word="Threatened">Threatened</span> <span word="resources">resources</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="mentioned">mentioned</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="specified">specified</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="essay">essay</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="provide">provide</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="address">address</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="current">current</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>.</p>
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