英语讲义【123】只有其意，不见其形
<p> 一篇好的文章不但内容丰富有条理，句子结构紧凑清楚，遣词用字更是恰到好处，引人入胜。即使不能达到这样理想的境界，至少也要思路清晰、文字正确。</p><p> 下面四段出处不同的文字乖离了英语句法标准，必须更正。</p><p> 先看第一段文字：</p><p> <span word="Fifteen">Fifteen</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="tutor">tutor</span> - <span word="Available">Available</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span>.</p><p> 这段文字虽然措词凌乱，但是并不难理解讲的是什么；真的是 只有其意，不见其形或是有意无形。稍微分析一下，不难断定问题所在。</p><p> ㈠ 构词法不对：<span word="fifteen">fifteen</span> <span word="yearsfifteen">yearsfifteen</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> /15-<span word="year">year</span> ；<span word="all">all</span> <span word="levelsall">levelsall</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span>. ㈡ 名词形式不对：<span word="experienced">experienced</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>. ㈢ 标点符号被忽略：<span word="full">full</span> <span word="timefull">timefull</span>-<span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> 修改后的句子合乎语法，但全句并不自然，要改写如下：</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="qualified">qualified</span> <span word="full">full</span>-<span word="time">time</span> <span word="tutor">tutor</span> <span word="with">with</span> 15 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="available">available</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="levels">levels</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span>.</p><p> 再看第二段文字：</p><p> <span word="All">All</span> <span word="materials">materials</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="design">design</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="guaranteed">guaranteed</span>.</p><p> 这段话的错误如下：</p><p> ㈠ 形容词词组不对：<span word="good">good</span> <span word="qualityof">qualityof</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="quality">quality</span>. ㈡ 定冠词被忽略：<span word="with">with</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="designwith">designwith</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="latest">latest</span> <span word="design">design</span>. ㈢被动语态中的接系动词不在场：<span word="guaranteedare">guaranteedare</span> <span word="guaranteed">guaranteed</span>.</p>
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