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<p><span word="Ambition">Ambition</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="resolution">resolution</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="carries">carries</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="decision">decision</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="provides">provides</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="required">required</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accomplish">accomplish</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="undertakings">undertakings</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>. <span word="Just">Just</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="Joseph">Joseph</span> <span word="Epstein">Epstein</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="famous">famous</span> <span word="American">American</span> <span word="writer">writer</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="it">it</span>, “<span word="And">And</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="decide">decide</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="choose">choose</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="formed">formed</span>.” <span word="Indeed">Indeed</span>, <span word="once">once</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="minds">minds</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="something">something</span>, <span word="then">then</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="specifically">specifically</span> <span word="orientated">orientated</span>. <span word="This">This</span> <span word="notion">notion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="observe">observe</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="closest">closest</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="truth">truth</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="does">does</span> <span word="apply">apply</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="aspects">aspects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="life">life</span>. </p><p><span word="First">First</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="first">first</span>, <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="renders">renders</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mission">mission</span>. <span word="No">No</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="choice">choice</span>. <span word="Your">Your</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="procures">procures</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="orientation">orientation</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="specially">specially</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="sense">sense</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="mission">mission</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="strong">strong</span> <span word="mission">mission</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="enable">enable</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="accomplish">accomplish</span> <span word="greatness">greatness</span>. <span word="Caesar">Caesar</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ancient">ancient</span> <span word="Roman">Roman</span> <span word="Empire">Empire</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="urged">urged</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> “<span word="I">I</span> <span word="came">came</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="saw">saw</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="conquered">conquered</span>.” <span word="And">And</span> <span word="became">became</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unrivaled">unrivaled</span> <span word="empire">empire</span> <span word="builder">builder</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Rome">Rome</span>. <span word="John">John</span> <span word="Milton">Milton</span>, <span word="stimulated">stimulated</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="aimed">aimed</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="some">some</span> “<span word="mighty">mighty</span> <span word="lines">lines</span>” <span word="which">which</span> <span word="England">England</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="unwillingly">unwillingly</span> <span word="forget">forget</span>, <span word="had">had</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="secured">secured</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="Shakespeare">Shakespeare</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="history">history</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="English">English</span> <span word="literature">literature</span>. </p><p><span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="one">one</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="potentials">potentials</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="full">full</span>. <span word="Ambition">Ambition</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="serve">serve</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="catalyst">catalyst</span> <span word="activating">activating</span> <span word="one">one</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="dormant">dormant</span> <span word="potentials">potentials</span>. <span word="Without">Without</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="one">one</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="potentials">potentials</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="remain">remain</span> <span word="slumbering">slumbering</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="dormant">dormant</span> <span word="volcano">volcano</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="case">case</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Ms">Ms</span> <span word="Zhang">Zhang</span> <span word="Haidi">Haidi</span>, <span word="a">a</span> <span word="Chinese">Chinese</span> <span word="Helen">Helen</span> <span word="Keller">Keller</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="ambition">ambition</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="turned">turned</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="paralyzed">paralyzed</span> <span word="Zhang">Zhang</span> <span word="Haidi">Haidi</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="well">well</span>-<span word="accomplished">accomplished</span> <span word="figure">figure</span> <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="dwarf">dwarf</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="normal">normal</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sun">sun</span>, <span word="though">though</span>, <span word="at">at</span> <span word="worst">worst</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="moon">moon</span>. </p>
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