小升初英语高分作文大全：3个写作简单技巧
<p> 【导读】作文在小升初考试中的地位越来越重要，小学生写作的问题也越来越突出。写好小升初英语作文一定离不开平时的积累，以下内容整理了小升初英语高分作文技巧，供大家参考。更多内容请关注英语网。</p><p> 英语在小升初入学考试中的作用越来越大，小六的学生英语水平差距不大，如何才能在小升初英语考试中脱颖而出，小升初英语写作成为关键，2011年理工附入学考试英语满分作文获得者，八人教育英语特长班的吴好好同学向大家分享了三个成功技巧：</p><p> 小升初英语写作技巧之一：用介词短语替代从句，例：</p><p> 原句：<span word="While">While</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="lasted">lasted</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>.</p><p> 修改后：<span word="During">During</span> <span word="tennis">tennis</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="started">started</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="lasted">lasted</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="morning">morning</span>.</p><p> 原句：<span word="When">When</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="come">come</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="light">light</span>, <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="right">right</span>.</p><p> 修改后：<span word="At">At</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="light">light</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="left">left</span>.</p><p> 小升初英语写作技巧之二：删除诸如<span word="who">who</span> <span word="is">is</span>或<span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span>之类的关系代词，变从句为短语，例：</p><p> 句：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="novel">novel</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="parts">parts</span>, <span word="told">told</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="place">place</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Middle">Middle</span> <span word="Ages">Ages</span>.</p><p> 修改后：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="three">three</span>-<span word="part">part</span> <span word="novel">novel</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span> <span word="set">set</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Middle">Middle</span> <span word="Ages">Ages</span>.</p><p> 注：把句中的<span word="three">three</span> <span word="parts">parts</span>改用形容词来表达，节省了四个不必要的单词<span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="written">written</span> <span word="in">in</span>。我们经常可以将关系代词如<span word="that">that</span>去掉，这只会引起最少的变动。</p>
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