英语作文高分秘籍
<p>一、怎样写好文章的开头</p><p> 开头是作文在阅卷老师面前的第一次亮相,它将决定你所写的文章在阅卷老师心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好,就意味着有了良好的开端,也就成功了一半。<span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="beginning">beginning</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="half">half</span> <span word="done">done</span>,我们该怎样一提起笔就让自己成功一半呢?</p><p> (一)“开门见山”式开头</p><p> 一般来说,文章的开头应尽量做到“开门见山”,即要用简单明了的语言引出文章的话题,使人一开始就能了解文章要说明的内容。</p><p> 1. 对于叙事类的文章,可以在开头把人物、时间、事件和环境交代清楚。如“<span word="A">A</span> <span word="Trip">Trip</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Huangshan">Huangshan</span>(黄山之旅)”的开头可以是:<span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="month">month</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Huangshan">Huangshan</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="train">train</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="ten">ten</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="there">there</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tiring">tiring</span> <span word="journey">journey</span>! <span word="We">We</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="tired">tired</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="scenery">scenery</span> <span word="excited">excited</span> <span word="us">us</span>.</p><p> 2. 对于论述性的文章,可以在开头处先阐明自己的观点,接着展开进一步的论述。如“<span word="The">The</span> <span word="Time">Time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Money">Money</span>(时间和金钱)” 的开头可以是:<span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="time">time</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="don">don</span>’<span word="t">t</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="so">so</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="when">when</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="up">up</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="earn">earn</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="back">back</span>, <span word="but">but</span>……</p><p> (二)回忆性开头</p><p> 在描述事件或游记类的文章中,采用回忆性的开头往往更能吸引人的眼球。这种类型的开头中通常含有描述自己心情或情绪的词汇,如<span word="never">never</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> (永远无法忘记), <span word="remember">remember</span> (记得),<span word="unforgettable">unforgettable</span> (难以忘怀的), <span word="exciting">exciting</span>(令人激动的),<span word="surprising">surprising</span>(令人惊讶的), <span word="sad">sad</span> (难过的)……如“<span word="A">A</span> <span word="Trip">Trip</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Huangshan">Huangshan</span>(黄山之旅)”的开头还以这样写:<span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="trip">trip</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="Huangshan">Huangshan</span>. 或<span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="unforgettable">unforgettable</span> <span word="experience">experience</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span>.</p>
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