中考英语书面表达优秀范文赏析
<p> 例1：</p><p> 随着阳光体育运动在全国开展，政府对中学生身体素质有所下降这个问题给予了高度重视，提出了这样的标语：“<span word="EXERCISE">EXERCISE</span> <span word="ONE">ONE</span> <span word="HOUR">HOUR</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="DAY">DAY</span>, <span word="KEEP">KEEP</span> <span word="ILLNESS">ILLNESS</span> <span word="AWAY">AWAY</span>”。同学们参加了各种体育锻炼之后，校园里出现了可喜的变化，强身健体，增强了学习效果，校园生活丰富了。请你报道一下学校开展这一活动的情况。</p><p> 注意：1. 词数80—100左右。</p><p> 2. 要求文章结构合理、内容通顺、句子连贯。</p><p> 参考词汇：<span word="build">build</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="one">one</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="strength">strength</span> 强健身体</p><p> <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span> 减少疾病</p><p> 构思方法：</p><p> 1.认真阅读、理解和思考题目中给出的所有信息点。信息点是围绕着提示从文字中扣出来的。</p><p> 2.这个题目的信息点应该是：</p><p> <span word="a">a</span>.阳光体育；</p><p> <span word="b">b</span>.政府重视中学生身体；</p><p> <span word="c">c</span>.提出的标语；</p><p> <span word="d">d</span>.参加了各种体育锻炼；</p><p> <span word="e">e</span>.有利于强身健体；</p><p> <span word="f">f</span>.增强了学习效果；</p><p> <span word="g">g</span>.校园生活丰富了。</p><p> 写作方法：</p><p> 1.安排以上信息点在文中的逻辑关系。</p><p> 2.用所掌握的词汇、词组、固定句型将所有信息点表现在文章中。(<span word="the">the</span> <span word="Sunny">Sunny</span> <span word="Sports">Sports</span>, <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="health">health</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="slogan">slogan</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>, <span word="build">build</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="one">one</span>’<span word="s">s</span> <span word="body">body</span> <span word="strength">strength</span>, <span word="reduce">reduce</span> <span word="diseases">diseases</span>, <span word="make">make</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="effective">effective</span>, <span word="school">school</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="colourful">colourful</span>)</p>
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