2014中考英语写作提升周周练+范文精讲(1)
<p>作文练习一：</p><p>学校的英语报就争做校园环保小卫士话题征文，请你投稿。谈谈你平时的</p><p>具体做法、你的感受以及建议。</p><p>提示词语：<span word="environment">environment</span> , <span word="collect">collect</span> <span word="bottles">bottles</span>, <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="off">off</span>, <span word="duty">duty</span>, <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="difference">difference</span>, <span word="should">should</span></p><p><span word="One">One</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="version">version</span>:</p><p><span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="pick">pick</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="litter">litter</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="floor">floor</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="collect">collect</span> <span word="bottles">bottles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="classroom">classroom</span>.</p><p><span word="As">As</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="duty">duty</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="simplest">simplest</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="real">real</span> <span word="difference">difference</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="suggest">suggest</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="reuse">reuse</span> <span word="books">books</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="recycling">recycling</span> <span word="programmes">programmes</span>.</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span>.</p><p>范文讲解：</p><p>审题要点：具体做法，感受，建议。</p><p>开篇首先要点出话题：<span word="Good">Good</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span>.</p><p>句式提升：<span word="Can">Can</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="imagine">imagine</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="rubbish">rubbish</span>?</p><p>一. 具体做法：<span word="To">To</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="pick">pick</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="litter">litter</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="floor">floor</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>,</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="collect">collect</span> <span word="bottles">bottles</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="forget">forget</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="leave">leave</span> <span word="the">the</span></p>
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