2014中考英语写作提升周周练+范文精讲(2)
<p>父母为我们付出了很多，你又做过哪些事情来表达自己的感恩之情呢?某英文报纸就感恩主题进行征文，请你投稿。描述你为父母做过的一件事，并谈谈你的感受。</p><p>提示词语：<span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span>, <span word="show">show</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span> (表示感激), <span word="something">something</span> <span word="special">special</span></p><p><span word="One">One</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="version">version</span>:</p><p><span word="Theres">Theres</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="born">born</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="care">care</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="happily">happily</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span>. <span word="Both">Both</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="music">music</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="CD">CD</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>. <span word="Last">Last</span> <span word="Sunday">Sunday</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="went">went</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bookstore">bookstore</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="chose">chose</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="top">top</span> 10.</p><p><span word="While">While</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span> <span word="together">together</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="played">played</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="CD">CD</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="joy">joy</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="warm">warm</span> <span word="hug">hug</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="smile">smile</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="sweet">sweet</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="proud">proud</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="did">did</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="Their">Their</span> <span word="smiles">smiles</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="encouragement">encouragement</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mind">mind</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="often">often</span>.</p><p>范文讲解：</p><p>审题要点：1.翻译中文提示，引出话题感激。 2.描述一件事。 3.谈感受</p><p>注意：英文提示词尽量都用上，已用红色表示出来。</p><p>一. 开篇翻译提示，引出话题：</p><p><span word="Theres">Theres</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="doubt">doubt</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="given">given</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="since">since</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="born">born</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="care">care</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="happily">happily</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="special">special</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="gratitude">gratitude</span></p>
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