2014中考英语写作提升周周练+范文精讲(4)
<p>假设你叫 <span word="Lily">Lily</span>，是学校英语角的主持人，你收到了 <span word="Tom">Tom</span> 的一封来信。请你根据他的来信内容写一封回信，针对他的烦恼，谈谈你的看法，提出一些建议，并鼓励他努力学习。</p><p><span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Lily">Lily</span>,</p><p><span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="days">days</span>. <span word="You">You</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Grade">Grade</span> 9 <span word="this">this</span> <span word="term">term</span>. <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="finish">finish</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="homework">homework</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="midnight">midnight</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="fun">fun</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="tired">tired</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="do">do</span>?</p><p><span word="Yours">Yours</span>,</p><p><span word="Tom">Tom</span></p><p><span word="One">One</span> <span word="possible">possible</span> <span word="version">version</span>:</p><p><span word="Dear">Dear</span> <span word="Tom">Tom</span>,</p><p><span word="Nice">Nice</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span>. <span word="Too">Too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="bored">bored</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tired">tired</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>.</p><p><span word="But">But</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="why">why</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="feelings">feelings</span>? <span word="Maybe">Maybe</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="homework">homework</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="its">its</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="full">full</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="relax">relax</span>. <span word="Anyway">Anyway</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hope">hope</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="saying">saying</span>, <span word="No">No</span> <span word="pains">pains</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="gains">gains</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>, <span word="youll">youll</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bright">bright</span> <span word="future">future</span>.</p><p><span word="Yours">Yours</span>,</p><p><span word="Lily">Lily</span></p><p>范文讲解</p><p>审题要点：1.复述他的烦恼，谈看法。2.提出一些建议。3.鼓励努力学习</p><p>一. 针对烦恼谈看法：<span word="Nice">Nice</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="hear">hear</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="you">you</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="understand">understand</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="feeling">feeling</span>. <span word="Too">Too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="bored">bored</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tired">tired</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="homework">homework</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="studies">studies</span>.</p>
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