中考英语作文范文及点评：一张足球比赛入场券
<p> 【习作要求】</p><p> 马虎搞到两张全兴队对国安队的足球比赛入场券。他电话通知好友赵华洋，约他放学后在新华公园门口碰头，一起吃晚饭，然后去看球赛。二人在饭店美美吃了一顿，到付账时马虎才发现自己把钱夹忘在了家里，入场券也在他的钱夹中。</p><p> 【学生习作】</p><p> <span word="Ma">Ma</span> <span word="Hu">Hu</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span> <span word="of">of</span> (1) <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="football">football</span> <span word="match">match</span> <span word="between">between</span> <span word="Quanxing">Quanxing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Guoan">Guoan</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="thinking">thinking</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="invite">invite</span> (2) <span word="his">his</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="Zhao">Zhao</span> <span word="Huayang">Huayang</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="watch">watch</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="together">together</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="call">call</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="told">told</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="meet">meet</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="gate">gate</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Xinhua">Xinhua</span> <span word="Park">Park</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span> (3) <span word="together">together</span>.</p><p> <span word="They">They</span> <span word="met">met</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="dinner">dinner</span> (4) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="restaurant">restaurant</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="waiter">waiter</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bill">bill</span>. <span word="Ma">Ma</span> <span word="Hu">Hu</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="left">left</span> (5) <span word="his">his</span> <span word="wallet">wallet</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span> <span word="kept">kept</span> (6) <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="wallet">wallet</span>, <span word="too">too</span>.</p><p> (1)<span word="of">of</span>在这里不是表示所有关系，所以应把<span word="of">of</span>改成<span word="for">for</span>，表示用途。</p><p> (2)动词<span word="invite">invite</span>在介词<span word="of">of</span>的后面，应把它变为<span word="ing">ing</span>形式。</p><p> (3)连词<span word="and">and</span>连接的应该是两个并列的动词不定式，所以应把<span word="had">had</span>改为<span word="to">to</span> <span word="have">have</span>。</p><p> (4)这里注意<span word="dinner">dinner</span>前面有形容词修饰时，那么应在形容词前面加<span word="a">a</span>。</p><p> (5)应把<span word="left">left</span>改成<span word="had">had</span> <span word="left">left</span>。因为到发现时为止前面的动作已经完成，要用过去完成时态。</p><p> (6)此处是被动语态，应加上<span word="were">were</span>。</p>
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