中考英语作文考前准备：句式多变 花样翻新
<p> 句式多变</p><p> 如果一百份试卷里都是清一色的<span word="Ithink">Ithink</span>简单句，那阅卷人读起来将会多么的乏味，乏味至极的阅卷人又如何能给得出高分？所以，我们在写句子的时候，要尽可能的变换句式和结构，让文章富于变化，错落有致。具体地说：中考作文中，我们可以尝试使用更多的复合句，主要是宾语从句、状语从句以及尝试变化语态。例如，2008年中考北京卷作文题，以汶川地震为背景描写一个叫做林浩的小英雄的故事以及自身感受。其中有一句细节描写叫做他救出了自己的同学并步行七小时到达安全地点。例文给出的句子是<span word="he">he</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span>. <span word="Then">Then</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="walked">walked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="hoursto">hoursto</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>. 这句话我们可以改写成为一个从句：<span word="saving">saving</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span>, <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="Haowalked">Haowalked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>.</p><p> 如果再加上语态的变换，还可以改写成：<span word="Being">Being</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="earthquake">earthquake</span>, <span word="two">two</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="LinHaos">LinHaos</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="walked">walked</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="seven">seven</span> <span word="hours">hours</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Lin">Lin</span> <span word="Hao">Hao</span>.这样的变化在作文中能够主动使用的话，一定会增加阅卷人的青睐，从而给你的文章增加获胜的筹码。</p><p> </p>
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