中考英语满分作文：A meaningful Mid-autumn Day
<p> <span word="Mid">Mid</span>-<span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="Day">Day</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="festivals">festivals</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="tales">tales</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="everyone">everyone</span> <span word="gets">gets</span> <span word="together">together</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="family">family</span>, <span word="eating">eating</span> <span word="mooncakes">mooncakes</span>, <span word="chatting">chatting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="moon">moon</span>. <span word="Everyone">Everyone</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Mid">Mid</span>-<span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="night">night</span>.</p><p> <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="young">young</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="cheerful">cheerful</span> <span word="Mid">Mid</span>-<span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="Day">Day</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="things">things</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="gradually">gradually</span>(渐渐地) <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="festival">festival</span>. <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="stand">stand</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="balcony">balcony</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="eat">eat</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="mooncake">mooncake</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="festival">festival</span>!</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Mid">Mid</span>-<span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="Day">Day</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="year">year</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="classmates">classmates</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="classroom">classroom</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="gave">gave</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="small">small</span> <span word="mooncake">mooncake</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="bought">bought</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="before">before</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="rained">rained</span> <span word="heavily">heavily</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="order">order</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="mooncakes">mooncakes</span> <span word="dry">dry</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="wet">wet</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="home">home</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="poured">poured</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="love">love</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="us">us</span> <span word="onto">onto</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="mooncakes">mooncakes</span>! <span word="Afterwards">Afterwards</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="ate">ate</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lovely">lovely</span> <span word="mooncakes">mooncakes</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="performed">performed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="beautiful">beautiful</span> <span word="tale">tale</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Change">Change</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="laughed">laughed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="sang">sang</span>.</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="meaningful">meaningful</span> <span word="Mid">Mid</span>-<span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="Day">Day</span> <span word="Ive">Ive</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="had">had</span>.</p><p> 教师评语：</p><p> <span word="Mid">Mid</span>-<span word="autumn">autumn</span> <span word="Day">Day</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="traditional">traditional</span> <span word="festivals">festivals</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="something">something</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="On">On</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="party">party</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="laughed">laughed</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="laughed">laughed</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p>
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