中考英语作文范例：温泉让我得到休息
<p> 题目：请以<span word="Hot">Hot</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="Me">Me</span> <span word="Have">Have</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="Rest">Rest</span>为题，写一篇不少于60个单词的作文。</p><p> <span word="Hot">Hot</span> <span word="spring">spring</span> <span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="Me">Me</span> <span word="Have">Have</span> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="Rest">Rest</span></p><p> 温泉让我得到休息</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="coats">coats</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="ran">ran</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lemon">lemon</span> <span word="spring">spring</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="put">put</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="feet">feet</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="cried">cried</span> <span word="out">out</span>, <span word="Wow">Wow</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="hot">hot</span>! <span word="I">I</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="hot">hot</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="afraid">afraid</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="burn">burn</span> <span word="me">me</span>...<span word="So">So</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="walked">walked</span> <span word="carefully">carefully</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="spring">spring</span>. <span word="One">One</span> <span word="step">step</span>,<span word="two">two</span>... <span word="I">I</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="heat">heat</span> <span word="slowly">slowly</span> <span word="climbing">climbing</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="body">body</span>.</p><p> 我们脱下外套，快速奔向柠檬泉，当我第一次把脚伸进水中时，我大声喊道：哇，水是热的!我一开始不知道水如此热，所以我有点儿担心会被热水烫到。于是，我小心翼翼地走进温泉，一步，两步......我能感觉到热量慢慢地进入我的身体。</p><p> 点评：要写出生动有趣的事，除了把事情的来龙去脉说清楚，还一定要注意增加文章的细节，这是必不可少的，丰富的细节描写能为你的文章增色不少，使人读起来具有一种身临其境的感觉。另外，本篇时态运用十分得当，整篇文章的动词过去时一脉相承。</p><p> </p>
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