2007年乐山市中考英语满分作文范文
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="Sunshine">Sunshine</span> <span word="Sports">Sports</span> <span word="program">program</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="warmly">warmly</span> <span word="welcomed">welcomed</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="Nearly">Nearly</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="it">it</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="sports">sports</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fun">fun</span>. <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="skipping">skipping</span> <span word="rope">rope</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="keeps">keeps</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="healthy">healthy</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="relaxed">relaxed</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="walk">walk</span>. <span word="They">They</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="staying">staying</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="classroom">classroom</span>. <span word="However">However</span>， <span word="a">a</span> <span word="few">few</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="still">still</span> <span word="worried">worried</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="room">room</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="playground">playground</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="finish">finish</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="homework">homework</span>.</p><p> <span word="No">No</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="program">program</span>，<span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="fit">fit</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> 点评：本文最大的优点在于，作者在传达不同的学生为什么选择不同的运动的时，所使用的表达方式，比如<span word="They">They</span> <span word="think">think</span>，<span word="They">They</span> <span word="believe">believe</span>，<span word="They">They</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="good">good</span>等，避免了重复，展现了语言的多样化。 这并不是每个同学都能做到的，很多同学在表达观点时很容易犯重复的毛病，通通使用<span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span>，这样使文章看起来很乏味，因此，本文作者丰富的表达方式有很大的借鉴意义。</p><p> </p>
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