2011年广西桂林市中考英语作文
<p> <span word="Guilin">Guilin</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="national">national</span> <span word="civilized">civilized</span> <span word="city">city</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="students">students</span>, <span word="what">what</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span>?</p><p> <span word="We">We</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="respect">respect</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="polite">polite</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="others">others</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="friendly">friendly</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="around">around</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="obey">obey</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="crossing">crossing</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="streets">streets</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="walk">walk</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="zebra">zebra</span> <span word="crossing">crossing</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="mustn">mustn</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="street">street</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="lights">lights</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="red">red</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="environment">environment</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="We">We</span> <span word="mustn">mustn</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="grass">grass</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="climb">climb</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>. <span word="Litter">Litter</span> <span word="mustn">mustn</span> <span word="t">t</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="thrown">thrown</span> <span word="everywhere">everywhere</span>.</p><p> <span word="Guilin">Guilin</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="hometown">hometown</span>. <span word="Let">Let</span> <span word="s">s</span> <span word="try">try</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="civilized">civilized</span> <span word="city">city</span>.</p><p> 书面表达评分标准：</p><p> 1. 评分时先根据短文内容和语言表达，初步确定其所属档次，然后根据该档次的要求衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。</p><p> 2. 本大题满分为15分，不设小数点以下分值。按五个档次给分。</p><p> 3. 文中若出现真实的人名、校名，扣2分。</p><p> 包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇， 用词准确、语法正确、句子通顺、行文连贯、表达清楚，具有较强的语言运用能力。</p><p> 基本包含所有要点，应用了较丰富的语言结构和词汇，句子较通顺，表达较清楚，但有少量错误。</p><p> 内容包含了多数要点，语言表达过于简单，句子不够通顺，有部分语言错误，基本上不影响总体理解。</p>
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