My good friend
<p><span word="E">E</span>度英语网专稿 未经允许不得转载</p><p><span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Te">Te</span>.</p><p> <span word="Li">Li</span> <span word="Te">Te</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="alovely">alovely</span> <span word="boy">boy</span> . <span word="He">He</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Yi">Yi</span> <span word="He">He</span> <span word="school">school</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="class">class</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="is">is</span> 12 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>.<span word="Although">Although</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="older">older</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="short">short</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="thin">thin</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="atlearning">atlearning</span> ,<span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="hard">hard</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="results">results</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="good">good</span>.</p><p> <span word="He">He</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Linyi">Linyi</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="isnot">isnot</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="school">school</span>,<span word="so">so</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="bike">bike</span>,<span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="foot">foot</span>.</p><p> <span word="Like">Like</span> <span word="me">me</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="hobbies">hobbies</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="reading">reading</span> ,<span word="collecting">collecting</span> <span word="stamps">stamps</span> ,<span word="playing">playing</span> <span word="computer">computer</span> <span word="games">games</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>. <span word="Onweekends">Onweekends</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="together">together</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="doing">doing</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="homework">homework</span>, <span word="watching">watching</span> <span word="TV">TV</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="visiting">visiting</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="friends">friends</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="fun">fun</span> <span word="together">together</span>.</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="treasure">treasure</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="friendship">friendship</span> .<span word="Ill">Ill</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="hisgood">hisgood</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="forever">forever</span>.</p><p> 六年级 张笑尘</p><p>点评：<span word="Nice">Nice</span>！六年级的学生能写出这么流畅的作文很不容易。对于同学既有细节描写又有感情抒发，用词相当准确，逻辑也很清晰，只有少数语法错误，希望继续努力。</p><p><span word="Jack">Jack</span> 张</p><p>批改老师：<span word="Jack">Jack</span> 张</p><p><span word="Jack">Jack</span>张，（查看<span word="Jack">Jack</span>张老师介绍 课堂实拍），老师人称杰克船长（<span word="Captain">Captain</span> <span word="Jack">Jack</span>），毕业于北京大学，有独特的英语学习方法和备考参考技巧。张老师上课非常有激情，善于调动课堂的气氛和学生的积极性，有极强的责任感。所教导的学生无不成绩大幅提高，并真正爱上了英语学习。</p>
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