我的朋友的父母是有交通工具的情况
<p><span word="E">E</span>度英语网专稿 未经允许不得转载</p><p> <span word="My">My</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="Mike">Mike</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="family">family</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="people">people</span> .<span word="And">And</span> <span word="hisfamily">hisfamily</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="father">father</span>,<span word="mather">mather</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span>. <span word="his">his</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="about">about</span> 6 <span word="kilometers">kilometers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="school">school</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="bike">bike</span> ,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span>.<span word="His">His</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hospotil">hospotil</span>.<span word="He">He</span> <span word="goesto">goesto</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="car">car</span>,<span word="about">about</span> <span word="take">take</span> 40 <span word="minute">minute</span>.<span word="His">His</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="bank">bank</span>,<span word="she">she</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="subway">subway</span></p><p> <span word="What">What</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="you">you</span>?</p><p>修改建议：</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span> <span word="named">named</span> <span word="Mike">Mike</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="lives">lives</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="away">away</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="me">me</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="family">family</span>: <span word="his">his</span> <span word="father">father</span>, <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="himself">himself</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="about">about</span> 6 <span word="kilometers">kilometers</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="home">home</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="goes">goes</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="bike">bike</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="catch">catch</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="leaves">leaves</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="late">late</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="father">father</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hospital">hospital</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="car">car</span>. <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="about">about</span> 40 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="driving">driving</span>. <span word="His">His</span> <span word="mother">mother</span> <span word="works">works</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bank">bank</span>. <span word="She">She</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="subway">subway</span> <span word="bucause">bucause</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="convenient">convenient</span>.</p><p>批改老师：朱平</p><p>朱平，（查看朱平老师介绍）学而思乐加乐优秀教师，现主攻初中同步，朱老师对北京市中考英语颇有研究，能准确把握北京市中考英语的重点和难点，而且了解初中生的学习特点，能准确把握学生容易出错的地方，并能有针对性地帮助学生击破弱点，攻克难点，稳步提高学习成绩。</p>
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