Exciting race
<p><span word="E">E</span>度英语网专稿 未经允许不得转载</p><p><span word="exciting">exciting</span> <span word="race">race</span></p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="fristday">fristday</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="theyear">theyear</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Years">Years</span> <span word="Day">Day</span>.<span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span>.<span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="big">big</span> <span word="race">race</span>,<span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="race">race</span>,<span word="there">there</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="tug">tug</span>-<span word="of">of</span>-<span word="war">war</span>,<span word="rope">rope</span> <span word="skipping">skipping</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="race">race</span>.<span word="Itsvery">Itsvery</span> <span word="exciting">exciting</span>.<span word="There">There</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="twenty">twenty</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="race">race</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="class">class</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="excited">excited</span>.<span word="I">I</span> <span word="join">join</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="race">race</span>,<span word="so">so</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="tired">tired</span>.<span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="chalk">chalk</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="results">results</span>,<span word="because">because</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="weredo">weredo</span> <span word="bester">bester</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="class">class</span>.<span word="We">We</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="happy">happy</span>!</p><p>作文修改如下：</p><p><span word="The">The</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="theyear">theyear</span> <span word="isthe">isthe</span> <span word="New">New</span> <span word="Years">Years</span> <span word="Day">Day</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="isa">isa</span> <span word="popular">popular</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="holiday">holiday</span>. <span word="Our">Our</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="excitingsports">excitingsports</span> <span word="meeting">meeting</span>, <span word="including">including</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="events">events</span>:<span word="tug">tug</span>-<span word="of">of</span>-<span word="war">war</span>, <span word="rope">rope</span> <span word="skipping">skipping</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="running">running</span> <span word="race">race</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="joined">joined</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="events">events</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="tired">tired</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="game">game</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="over">over</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="our">our</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="won">won</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="records">records</span> <span word="because">because</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="us">us</span>. <span word="We">We</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="delighted">delighted</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="satisfied">satisfied</span>!</p><p>批改老师：刘晓伟</p><p>刘晓伟，（查看刘晓伟老师介绍 课堂实拍） 毕业于兰州大学。提倡心态方法知识的处世哲学，主张全力以赴地学习，有的放矢地考试。对付考试一定要用最直接、最有效的方法，不 断 修炼技巧的同时加强自身的实力。在北京多所培训机构担任过英语教师，从事教学，教研，教材编写等工作，教学经验丰富。获得优秀教师称号，全国青少年英语科 技大赛考官，与他人合著《高考英语状元宝典》。</p>
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