Protect the environment
<p><span word="E">E</span>度英语网专稿 未经允许不得转载</p><p><span word="as">as</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="becomes">becomes</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="surprised">surprised</span>.<span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="tress">tress</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="down">down</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="on">on</span>.<span word="what">what</span> <span word="more">more</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span>.<span word="what">what</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span>? <span word="first">first</span>,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="grew">grew</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tress">tress</span>,<span word="and">and</span> <span word="kept">kept</span> <span word="watering">watering</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="tress">tress</span> <span word="grew">grew</span> <span word="quickly">quickly</span>.<span word="second">second</span>,<span word="dont">dont</span> <span word="threw">threw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rubbish">rubbish</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span>,<span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="river">river</span> <span word="cleaning">cleaning</span> ,<span word="then">then</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="river">river</span>.<span word="second">second</span>,<span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="places">places</span>,<span word="try">try</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="best">best</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="protect">protect</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="home">home</span>.<span word="finally">finally</span>,<span word="lets">lets</span> <span word="hurry">hurry</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="action">action</span>!</p><p>修改范文如下：</p><p><span word="As">As</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="know">know</span>/<span word="As">As</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="serious">serious</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="treeshave">treeshave</span> <span word="beencut">beencut</span> <span word="down">down</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="rivershave">rivershave</span> <span word="beenpolluted">beenpolluted</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="more">more</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="airis">airis</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="fromfresh">fromfresh</span>. </p><p><span word="What">What</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>? <span word="First">First</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="grow">grow</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="trees">trees</span>. <span word="Second">Second</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="shouldnt">shouldnt</span> <span word="throw">throw</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rubbish">rubbish</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rivers">rivers</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="rivers">rivers</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="clean">clean</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="fish">fish</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happy">happy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="there">there</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bus">bus</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="ofa">ofa</span> <span word="car">car</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="fresh">fresh</span> <span word="again">again</span>. </p><p><span word="Lets">Lets</span> <span word="hurry">hurry</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="take">take</span> <span word="actions">actions</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="now">now</span>！</p><p>批改老师：刘晓伟</p><p>刘晓伟，（查看刘晓伟老师介绍 课堂实拍） 毕业于兰州大学。提倡心态方法知识的处世哲学，主张全力以赴地学习，有的放矢地考试。对付考试一定要用最直接、最有效的方法，不 断 修炼技巧的同时加强自身的实力。在北京多所培训机构担任过英语教师，从事教学，教研，教材编写等工作，教学经验丰富。获得优秀教师称号，全国青少年英语科 技大赛考官，与他人合著《高考英语状元宝典》。</p>
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