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word="bed">bed</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="days">days</span>, <span word="take">take</span> <span word="medicines">medicines</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="drink">drink</span> <span word="water">water</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="possible">possible</span>.</p><p> <span word="So">So</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ask">ask</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="days">days</span> <span word="sick">sick</span> <span word="leave">leave</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="promise">promise</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span 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