雅思写作高分技巧：要素分析法
<p> 对象要素法：每一个雅思写作题目都包括很多的要素，在我们准备这些雅思写作的时候，就可以从这些要素入手，逐一分析，这样就会让整个雅思写作更加的全面。</p><p> 考题：<span word="air">air</span> <span word="transport">transport</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="export">export</span> <span word="fruits">fruits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="vegetables">vegetables</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="coutries">coutries</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="grown">grown</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="season">season</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="justified">justified</span>. <span word="What">What</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>?</p><p> 我们可从话题所涉及的各个对象出发，如空运水果蔬菜是否合理，那么空运水果蔬菜所涉及的对象就多了，包括出口国，进口国，消费者，航空公司和政府。</p><p> 对各个要素的分析：</p><p> 1. <span word="for">for</span> <span word="consumers">consumers</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="taste">taste</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="foreign">foreign</span> <span word="foods">foods</span> <span word="without">without</span> <span word="going">going</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>.</p><p> 2. <span word="for">for</span> <span word="transporters">transporters</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="operation">operation</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="income">income</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span>, <span word="only">only</span> <span word="about">about</span> 40% <span word="seats">seats</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="plane">plane</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="service">service</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="off">off</span>-<span word="seasons">seasons</span> <span word="compared">compared</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="offering">offering</span> <span word="discounted">discounted</span> <span word="plane">plane</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span>, <span word="transporting">transporting</span> <span word="foods">foods</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="choice">choice</span>.</p><p> 3. <span word="for">for</span> <span word="exporters">exporters</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="orders">orders</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="gold">gold</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="business">business</span>. <span word="With">With</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="yield">yield</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="foods">foods</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="sold">sold</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="decay">decay</span>/<span word="rot">rot</span>/ <span word="go">go</span> <span word="bad">bad</span>/ <span word="moldy">moldy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="transportation">transportation</span> <span word="just">just</span> <span word="solves">solves</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="problem">problem</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="brings">brings</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="them">them</span>.</p><p> 4. <span word="for">for</span> <span word="governments">governments</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="happier">happier</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="receiving">receiving</span> <span word="tax">tax</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="economy">economy</span> <span word="development">development</span>.</p>
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