如何攻克雅思写作中经常出现的问题
<p> 在雅思写作的教学过程中,有机会批改了大量学员的雅思作文,且在这些作文当中发现雅思学员写作部分普遍存在离题,词汇贫乏,语法错误多等问题。下文中,将从雅思写作的评分标准入手谈几点教学心得,以期对学员的雅思写作有所帮助。</p><p> 雅思写作的评分标准之一是: <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="Response">Response</span>。在这个方面最重要的是字数和审题。</p><p> 字数的问题相对比较小些,很多学员认为字数是硬件,但就因为认为只要是把字数写够,再用一些比较高级的词汇和复合句就算完成了任务,而最后由于没有把握论证的方向,造成写作扣题不严密的学员比比皆是。有的甚至把问题解决型的文章写成了辩论式的文章。如有学员在一篇讨论为什么有许多民工进城,如何解决的文章的引言段里写到:<span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="peasants">peasants</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="flooding">flooding</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="metropolises">metropolises</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="jobs">jobs</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="increasing">increasing</span> <span word="continually">continually</span>, <span word="vast">vast</span> <span word="changes">changes</span> <span word="await">await</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="society">society</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="speed">speed</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="cities">cities</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="is">is</span> <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="faster">faster</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="before">before</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="partly">partly</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="hardworking">hardworking</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="phenomenon">phenomenon</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="exerted">exerted</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="impacts">impacts</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="pressure">pressure</span>, <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="population">population</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="housing">housing</span> <span word="problems">problems</span>。这位学员犯了答非所问的错误,题目要求答的是原因和解决办法,不是分析其所带来的正面及负面问题,最后无论语言质量多高,也拿不到好的分数。可见审题是非常重要的,它是学员通向高分的第一步。</p>
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