IELTS复习指南：雅思大作文7分探秘
<p> 现在的年轻人总是会发出理想很丰满，现实很骨感这样的感叹，来表达对现实生活的无奈。而在雅思写作考试中，考生们又何尝不会经历这种无奈呢？写作7分是许多考生梦寐以求的分数，但即使是一些外籍教师所撰写的范文，在考官笔下也不过是7-8分！对于国内大多数雅思考生而言，7分似乎是可望而不可及的。那么，究竟怎样的文章，才能得到考官的青睐，最终幸运的得到7分的分数呢？</p><p> 一.<span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="response">response</span></p><p> 1. 具体要求</p><p> <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="response">response</span>表示任务的完成。在官方给出的评分标准中，7分有这样的要求：</p><p> 1. <span word="Address">Address</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="parts">parts</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="task">task</span>,</p><p> 2. <span word="Present">Present</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="position">position</span> <span word="throughout">throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="response">response</span>,</p><p> 3. <span word="Present">Present</span>, <span word="extend">extend</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="tendency">tendency</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="over">over</span>-<span word="generalize">generalize</span> <span word="and">and</span>/<span word="or">or</span> <span word="supporting">supporting</span> <span word="ideas">ideas</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="lack">lack</span> <span word="focus">focus</span>。</p><p> ① 回答了题目要求的所有问题。②整篇文章观点鲜明。③详细的解释和论证了观点。</p><p> 2. 范例评析</p><p> ▲ 剑桥雅思全真试题7 <span word="Test">Test</span>2 <span word="Task">Task</span>2</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="fixed">fixed</span> <span word="punishments">punishments</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="type">type</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>. <span word="Others">Others</span>, <span word="however">however</span>, <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="circumstances">circumstances</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="crime">crime</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="motivation">motivation</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="committing">committing</span> <span word="it">it</span>, <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taken">taken</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="deciding">deciding</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span>。</p>
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