雅思作文：1个题目3种开头段写法
<p> <span word="Throughout">Throughout</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="history">history</span>, <span word="male">male</span> <span word="leaders">leaders</span> <span word="often">often</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="violent">violent</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="conflicting">conflicting</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="governed">governed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="peaceful">peaceful</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>? <span word="Give">Give</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="example">example</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>。</p><p> 讲解不同的开篇方式，从简单到复杂，从低分到高分</p><p> 模式一： 3句式 <span word="rephrase">rephrase</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="title">title</span> + <span word="quote">quote</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span> + <span word="make">make</span> <span word="ones">ones</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="clear">clear</span></p><p> 用一个好的句式 <span word="Recently">Recently</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="hot">hot</span> <span word="debate">debate</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="whether">whether</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="peace">peace</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="governed">governed</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>。</p><p> 用动词变化和连词连接观点 <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="governors">governors</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="couldnt">couldnt</span> <span word="agree">agree</span>。</p><p> 提出自己的观点，如果现在还没有明确的观点，可以虚晃一枪 <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="analyze">analyze</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="opinions">opinions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="point">point</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span>。</p><p> 模式二： 由于上面一篇文章并没有显示出创造性，所以容易被考官识破，只能得到5到5.5 分，实在是模板痕迹太过明显，所以可以考虑升级。</p><p> 可以从<span word="world">world</span> <span word="governor">governor</span> 或者<span word="man">man</span>/ <span word="woman">woman</span>作为切入点，避免直接谈到话题，而是后退一步从话题的部分内容中切入</p><p> <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="agreed">agreed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="considerate">considerate</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="patient">patient</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="men">men</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="would">would</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="peaceful">peaceful</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="governor">governor</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>? <span word="Personally">Personally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="women">women</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="governors">governors</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="men">men</span>。</p>
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