雅思作文:如何避免空洞的大道理
<p> 雅思大作文考的是议论文,即考查考生是否能够在相对较短的时间内搜集论据,具体地论证自己的观点。另外,大作文的话题范围也很广,政府社会、工作、经济、科技、教育等话题都会考到。但对于长期接触国内英语学习的学生来说,在写作时仍然会摸不着头脑,无处下笔。因为中国考生很少考虑这方面的问题,学校老师也很少鼓励对这些社会话题进行讨论,造成考生想问题往往只能按照固定模式,因而论证非常空洞、缺乏说服力。</p><p> 中国考生在应对雅思作文时喜欢通过讲道理来说明问题,但话题中并不是所有题目和内容都可以通过道理来说服他人的,比如关于<span word="anti">anti</span>-<span word="social">social</span> <span word="behavior">behavior</span>, 属于道德范畴的话题,是很难用道理来讲清楚的。所以,建议考生在备考时需要加强论据论证的能力,使其能够很好地支持自己的观点。</p><p> 那么,应该如何对大作文进行有力的论证呢?最常用的方式就是解释和例证,几乎在每一篇雅思大作文中,都可以看见这两种论证方法的身影。</p><p> 如下面关于<span word="work">work</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span>的一段例证:</p><p> <span word="IBM">IBM</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="giants">giants</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> 70 <span word="million">million</span> <span word="US">US</span> <span word="dollars">dollars</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="northeastern">northeastern</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="telecommuting">telecommuting</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convert">convert</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="normal">normal</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="telecommuters">telecommuters</span>. <span word="Companies">Companies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="launch">launch</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scheme">scheme</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2009, <span word="which">which</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="spiritually">spiritually</span> <span word="wins">wins</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="supports">supports</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attracts">attracts</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="hires">hires</span>. 这段话中的2个例子都较好地完成了若员工选择在家上班,会对公司带来积极的作用这一证明。</p>
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