盘点雅思写作十大“见官死”失败开头
<p> 见官死开头之一：废话连篇不知所云</p><p> 典型失败案例： <span word="Topic">Topic</span> 1-<span word="Should">Should</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="allowed">allowed</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="married">married</span>?</p><p> <span word="This">This</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="interesting">interesting</span>. <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="talking">talking</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>. <span word="Because">Because</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="Im">Im</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="married">married</span></p><p> 修改方案：开门见山 直奔主题</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wise">wise</span> <span word="decision">decision</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="allow">allow</span> <span word="college">college</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="married">married</span>。</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span> 2-<span word="Will">Will</span> <span word="modern">modern</span> <span word="technology">technology</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="ever">ever</span> <span word="replace">replace</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="book">book</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="writing">writing</span> <span word="word">word</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="sole">sole</span> <span word="source">source</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="information">information</span>? 真题)</p><p> <span word="Ok">Ok</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>. <span word="First">First</span>, <span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="story">story</span>: <span word="I">I</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="friend">friend</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="likes">likes</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="much">much</span>. <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="day">day</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="uses">uses</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="read">read</span> <span word="news">news</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="play">play</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="games">games</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="internet">internet</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="daily">daily</span> <span word="life">life</span>。</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span> 3-<span word="The">The</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="environmental">environmental</span> <span word="protection">protection</span></p><p> <span word="Oh">Oh</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="surely">surely</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span>. <span word="Isnt">Isnt</span> <span word="it">it</span>? <span word="Of">Of</span> <span word="course">course</span>! <span word="Its">Its</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="important">important</span>!</p><p> 见官死开头之二：中式英文人见人晕</p><p> 典型失败案例：<span word="Topic">Topic</span> 1-<span word="The">The</span> <span word="happiest">happiest</span> <span word="moment">moment</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="life">life</span></p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="life">life</span>, <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="moments">moments</span> <span word="which">which</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="heart">heart</span> <span word="flower">flower</span> <span word="opened">opened</span> <span word="angrily">angrily</span></p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span> 2- <span word="The">The</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="problem">problem</span></p>
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