专家总结：雅思大作文写作的低分原因
<p> 让步段是一种实用性很强的写作段落，对话题的支持会起到非常好的效果。根据多年的教学经验和实践，笔者发现让步段非常适用于五段式的雅思大作文里。本文中，专家将就让步段的主要写法作一个系统的小结：</p><p> 一、 五段式中用于第三个主体段</p><p> 在五段式的大作文中，三个主体段一般都是以单边的方式，一边倒的支持某一个观点。而若将最后一个主体段写成让步段，不仅可以照顾到反方的论点，而且更有利于进一步支持和强化本段的观点，从而起到强化论述的效果：</p><p> <span word="Obviously">Obviously</span>，<span word="not">not</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="celebrity">celebrity</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="generous">generous</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span>，<span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="sure">sure</span>，<span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="Bill">Bill</span> <span word="Gates">Gates</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="known">known</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="making">making</span> <span word="donations">donations</span>，<span word="attending">attending</span> <span word="charitable">charitable</span> <span word="functions">functions</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="taking">taking</span> <span word="part">part</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="activities">activities</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="fortunate">fortunate</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>。</p><p> 在写让步段的时候，我们必须要使用表转折的连词，常用的有<span word="but">but</span>， <span word="however">however</span>， <span word="nevertheless">nevertheless</span>， <span word="nonetheless">nonetheless</span>等。有时候我们还可以使用让步状语从句来引导让步段，涉及的连词有：<span word="despite">despite</span>， <span word="in">in</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span>， <span word="although">although</span>， <span word="though">though</span>， <span word="even">even</span> <span word="though">though</span>， <span word="even">even</span> <span word="if">if</span>等。在上面这个例子中，我们看到作者用了2个简单句来描写反面的观点，对于用来描写反面观点的句子，建议一般以13句话为宜，而转折后的句子，通常在长度上要超过前面的句子。下面我们再来看一个让步段：</p>
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