雅思作文高端写法：你能猜到这结尾吗？
<p> 一个漂亮而又简洁的结尾对于高分大作文来说无疑是必须的，尽管最终评分的主要依据并不是由结尾段决定的，但是结尾段的出色完成对于一篇成功的学术类大作文是不可或缺的。在本章节中，老师将带领大家领略结尾的不同高端写法。</p><p> 回顾全文+观点+展望：</p><p> 这种结尾方式比较适合于双边结构的作文，在这种写法中，我们要注意的是结尾段由三个要素组成，其中第2个要素是必须的 ，但是句子的数量可以是3句也可以是2句甚至1个句子。首先我们来看一个例子：</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="sure">sure</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="animals">animals</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="testing">testing</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="products">products</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="minimum">minimum</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="suffering">suffering</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="convinced">convinced</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="testing">testing</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="continue">continue</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="humans">humans</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wonderful">wonderful</span> <span word="ways">ways</span>。</p><p> 上面这个例句中，作者将自己的观点隐藏在了一个宾语从句之后，起到了一个欲扬先抑的效果。但是这种效果必须搭配一个展望未来才能起到渲染的效果。我们来对比另外一个例子：</p><p> <span word="In">In</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span>, <span word="physical">physical</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="useful">useful</span> <span word="method">method</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="discipline">discipline</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> <span word="choice">choice</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="If">If</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="build">build</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="violence">violence</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="begin">begin</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="must">must</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="our">our</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span>。</p><p> 大家不难发现，2个句子都使用了相似的衔接方式，即首句委婉地回顾全文，将观点的对立面用让步的方式表达出来，同时也是对于主体段观点的回顾。然后再是用转折阐述自己的看法和观点。最后再用一个对于未来的期望来支撑自己的观点。这种顺序安排的优点在于对于文章的主体有很好的总结，但同时观点又是非常鲜明有力的，加上对于未来的润色，使得表达更流畅。用同样的方法，我们再来看第三个例句：</p>
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