名师点金：雅思写作中代词使用点拨
<p> 每每批阅学生作文，都会被各种代词若非偷梁换柱即乱舞春秋的问题弄得晕头转向，一篇贯穿着代词错误的文章往往让人感觉迷雾重重，不知所云，若想拨云见日不是一件易事。</p><p> 作为英语中衔接的一种重要形式，代词的使用值得引起重视和加以深思。</p><p> 先来看两个学生作文当中出现的句子：</p><p> <span word="Medical">Medical</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="cornerstones">cornerstones</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="becauseitis">becauseitis</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="youngsters">youngsters</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="adults">adults</span>.</p><p> <span word="Doctors">Doctors</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="able">able</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="controlthemselvesprofitable">controlthemselvesprofitable</span> <span word="activities">activities</span>.</p><p> 请注意上面两句话中标记出来的代词，它们的使用均存在问题，具体是什么问题，我们将在下文中得以解答。</p><p> 既然中国学生在英语的代词使用上是普遍存在错误的，在谈论错误分类之前，我们先来欣赏一下<span word="native">native</span> <span word="speaker">speaker</span>的文字中，代词使用的典范。 </p><p> 例文：</p><p> <span word="Itis">Itis</span> <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="work">work</span>: <span word="there">there</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="now">now</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="smooth">smooth</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="future">future</span>: <span word="but">but</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="round">round</span>, <span word="or">or</span> <span word="scramble">scramble</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="obstacles">obstacles</span>. <span word="Weve">Weve</span> <span word="got">got</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="live">live</span>, <span word="no">no</span> <span word="matter">matter</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="skies">skies</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="fallen">fallen</span>.</p><p> <span word="Thiswas">Thiswas</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="Constance">Constance</span> <span word="Chatterleys">Chatterleys</span> <span word="position">position</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="war">war</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="roof">roof</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="over">over</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="head">head</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="realized">realized</span> <span word="thatonemust">thatonemust</span> <span word="live">live</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="learn">learn</span>.</p><p> <span word="D">D</span>. <span word="H">H</span>. <span word="Lawrence">Lawrence</span> <span word="Lady">Lady</span> <span word="Chatterleys">Chatterleys</span> <span word="Lover">Lover</span></p>
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