雅思写作高分战略：大作文谋篇制胜
<p> 古往今来，杰出的军事家不胜枚举，然可谓之战略家者，凤毛麟角。诸葛孔明未出茅庐，已定三分天下；主席润之在世界上最小最简陋的作战室里却指挥了世界空前的人民解放战争。孙子曰：不谋万世者，不足谋一时；不谋全局者，不足谋一域。</p><p> </p><p> 其实，雅思作文写作也是如此。曾经有学生前来咨询老师，我上次作文写得可好了，我用了很多复杂的句型和罕见的词汇。文章洋洋洒洒300来字，当时看得我自己都激动了，可是成绩出来后只给了5分，当时简直就是晴天霹雳，把我雷得外酥里嫩的于是让学生将上次写作进行回忆。如下：</p><p> </p><p> 题目：<span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="cheap">cheap</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="brought">brought</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="benefits">benefits</span> <span word="while">while</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="argue">argue</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="nothing">nothing</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="drawbacks">drawbacks</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="worlds">worlds</span> <span word="environment">environment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resources">resources</span>。</p><p> </p><p> <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="points">points</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>。</p><p> </p><p> 首段：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="merits">merits</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="drawbacks">drawbacks</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="cheap">cheap</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="travel">travel</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="frequent">frequent</span> <span word="topic">topic</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="submerged">submerged</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attractive">attractive</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="beckoning">beckoning</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="relating">relating</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="discounted">discounted</span> <span word="air">air</span> <span word="tickets">tickets</span> <span word="online">online</span>。</p><p> </p><p> 中间段1：有些人说便宜机票好。第一，对乘客好，比如说；第二，对航空公司好，比如说；第三，对目的地好，比如说</p>
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