名师指导3月7日雅思考试大作文解析
<p> 题目：<span word="The">The</span> <span word="effects">effects</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="longer">longer</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="expectancy">expectancy</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="aging">aging</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="society">society</span></p><p> 本文的<span word="Assignment">Assignment</span> 是问题类的措辞。这个题目是说寿命长对个人和社会有什么影响，其实某种程度上就是问各位年纪大的人对个人和社会有什么影响。</p><p> 思路：</p><p> 1. 对个人的影响</p><p> 1) 向外看对年轻人</p><p> 观点：寿命变长<span word="larger">larger</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="elders">elders</span>---<span word="render">render</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="youth">youth</span> <span word="disadvantaged">disadvantaged</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span></p><p> 论证：<span word="It">It</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="observed">observed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="might">might</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="deprived">deprived</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="develop">develop</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="abilities">abilities</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="old">old</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="mean">mean</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="chances">chances</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="occupy">occupy</span> <span word="essential">essential</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="positions">positions</span>。</p><p> 内部可以配搭实验法。</p><p> <span word="A">A</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="researchers">researchers</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="University">University</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="Suzhou">Suzhou</span> <span word="conducted">conducted</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="research">research</span> <span word="recently">recently</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="white">white</span>-<span word="collar">collar</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="aging">aging</span> <span word="from">from</span> 25-35 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="companies">companies</span>, <span word="whose">whose</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="revealed">revealed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="three">three</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="five">five</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="expressed">expressed</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="promoted">promoted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="managerial">managerial</span> <span word="posts">posts</span> <span word="owing">owing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="large">large</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="senior">senior</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="held">held</span> <span word="supervisory">supervisory</span> <span word="positions">positions</span>。</p><p> 2) 向外看对家人</p><p> 老年人可以活得更久就可以更好地照顾他们的子女甚至是孙儿，对于家庭的幸福和稳定是很有好处的。</p><p> 观点：<span word="Longer">Longer</span> <span word="life">life</span> <span word="span">span</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="contribute">contribute</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="happiness">happiness</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="stability">stability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="family">family</span>。</p>
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