专家总结中国考生雅思议论文的十大失分点
<p> 大部分中国考生在写议论文时的失分点实在可惜，因此，专家总结和归纳了目前考生在写议论中的十大失分点，希望考生们在备考时予以重视。</p><p> 一、不一致</p><p> 所谓不一致不光指主谓不一致，还包括了数的不一致、时态不一致以及代词不一致等。</p><p> 比如：<span word="When">When</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="want">want</span> <span word="to">to</span>.</p><p> 分析：<span word="one">one</span>是第三人称单数，因此本句的<span word="have">have</span>应改为<span word="has">has</span>; <span word="want">want</span>应改为<span word="wants">wants</span>, 本句是典型的主谓不一致。</p><p> 改为：<span word="When">When</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="money">money</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="wants">wants</span> .</p><p> 二、修饰语错位</p><p> 与汉语不同，同一个修饰语置于句子不同的位置，句子的含义可能引起变化。对于这一点考生们往往没有引起足够的重视，因而造成了不必要的误解。</p><p> 比如：</p><p> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span> <span word="outside">outside</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="campus">campus</span>.</p><p> 分析：<span word="better">better</span>位置不当，应置于句末。</p><p> 三、句子不完整</p><p> 在口语中，交际双方可借助手势语气上下文等，不完整的句子完全可以被理解。可是书面语就不同了，句子结构不完整会令意思表达不清，这种情况常常在主句写完以后，作者又想加些补充说明时发生。</p>
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