雅思A类议论文及名师点评
<p> <span word="Many">Many</span> <span word="countries">countries</span> <span word="aim">aim</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="development">development</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="important">important</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="outweigh">outweigh</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span>?</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="definitely">definitely</span> <span word="true">true</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="lead">lead</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="by">by</span>-<span word="products">products</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="loss">loss</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="cover">cover</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="outstanding">outstanding</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="advantages">advantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="development">development</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="disadvantages">disadvantages</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="coexist">coexist</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="long">long</span> <span word="time">time</span>.</p><p> <span word="Economic">Economic</span> <span word="progress">progress</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="basis">basis</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="nations">nations</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="United">United</span> <span word="States">States</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="advanced">advanced</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standard">standard</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="high">high</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="level">level</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="welfare">welfare</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="medical">medical</span> <span word="care">care</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="free">free</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="Even">Even</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="poorest">poorest</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="States">States</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="insurance">insurance</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="ensures">ensures</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="impossibility">impossibility</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="starved">starved</span>. <span word="Take">Take</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="During">During</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="reform">reform</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="manufacturing">manufacturing</span> <span word="industry">industry</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="improved">improved</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="international">international</span> <span word="trade">trade</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="vigorous">vigorous</span>. <span word="Most">Most</span> <span word="multinational">multinational</span> <span word="companies">companies</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="investing">investing</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="country">country</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="China">China</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="opportunities">opportunities</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="standards">standards</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="higher">higher</span>.</p><p> <span word="But">But</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="ignore">ignore</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="losing">losing</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="day">day</span>. <span word="Especially">Especially</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="developing">developing</span> <span word="economy">economy</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="severe">severe</span> <span word="situations">situations</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="occur">occur</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="example">example</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="Asian">Asian</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="illegal">illegal</span> <span word="prostitutes">prostitutes</span> <span word="appear">appear</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="cater">cater</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="needs">needs</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="businessmen">businessmen</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="use">use</span> <span word="sex">sex</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="means">means</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="negotiation">negotiation</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="countries">countries</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="thing">thing</span> <span word="happened">happened</span> <span word="again">again</span>. <span word="Tiger">Tiger</span> <span word="Woods">Woods</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="typical">typical</span> <span word="example">example</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wealthy">wealthy</span> <span word="guy">guy</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="loyal">loyal</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="wife">wife</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="had">had</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="affairs">affairs</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="women">women</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="found">found</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="NBA">NBA</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="political">political</span> <span word="world">world</span>. <span word="Bill">Bill</span> <span word="Clinton">Clinton</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="former">former</span> <span word="president">president</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="United">United</span> <span word="State">State</span>, <span word="came">came</span> <span word="across">across</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="similar">similar</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="So">So</span> <span word="we">we</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="get">get</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="economic">economic</span> <span word="accumulation">accumulation</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="cause">cause</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="seek">seek</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="undesirable">undesirable</span> <span word="excuse">excuse</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="obtain">obtain</span> <span word="satisfaction">satisfaction</span>. <span word="Step">Step</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="step">step</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="collapse">collapse</span>. <span word="Other">Other</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="values">values</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="lost">lost</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span>. <span word="For">For</span> <span word="instance">instance</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="world">world</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="colleagues">colleagues</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="cooperative">cooperative</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="before">before</span>; <span word="instead">instead</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="competition">competition</span> <span word="makes">makes</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="enemies">enemies</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="relationship">relationship</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="worse">worse</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="past">past</span>. <span word="Money">Money</span>-<span word="oriented">oriented</span> <span word="society">society</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="formidable">formidable</span> <span word="thing">thing</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="consequence">consequence</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="loss">loss</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="social">social</span> <span word="values">values</span>.</p>
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