借剑七考官范文复制雅思写作技巧
<p> 写作应该是一件美好的事情，也是一件快乐的事情。它的美好和快乐来自一种经典的美，那就是朴素。然而，培训的逐渐商业化和考生日益的功利心态，以及双方的相互作用，使得各种雅思写作辅导书上充斥着扭曲这种美感的材料。许多基础薄弱并缺乏判断力的考生因此陷入窘境。</p><p> 本文的文本分析的材料来自2009年登陆中国大陆的剑桥雅思7册中考官所给的范文;</p><p> 本文的分析标准来自雅思官方网站上的评分标准;</p><p> 本文的目的在于重新回归雅思写作<span word="TASK">TASK</span> 2部分的评分标准;</p><p> 本文试图通过严肃性的学术分析，将考试的标准和考官的表现对应起来，按图索骥，找到可以借鉴的正确写作方法。</p><p> 希望给正在备战雅思写作的考生一点复习的方向。</p><p> 我们先来看剑七上第一篇雅思考题和考官的文章：</p><p> <span word="TEST">TEST</span> 1 <span word="WRITING">WRITING</span> <span word="TASK">TASK</span> 2</p><p> <span word="You">You</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="about">about</span> 40 <span word="minutes">minutes</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="task">task</span></p><p> <span word="Write">Write</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="topic">topic</span>:</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="generally">generally</span> <span word="believed">believed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="born">born</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="certain">certain</span> <span word="talents">talents</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="instance">instance</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="sport">sport</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="music">music</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="others">others</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="not">not</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="sometimes">sometimes</span> <span word="claimed">claimed</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="any">any</span> <span word="child">child</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="become">become</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="sports">sports</span> <span word="person">person</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="musician">musician</span>.</p>
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