雅思考生的作文修改及范文教师责任
<p> 班一位学生发给我的作文，要求修改，里面出现的问题请各位注意!</p><p> 文章修改过程中用到了很多课上所讲的句式和表达，希望大家能够熟练使用和掌握!</p><p> <span word="Topic">Topic</span>:</p><p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="responsible">responsible</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="judge">judge</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="behave">behave</span> <span word="well">well</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="subjects">subjects</span>. <span word="Discuss">Discuss</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="views">views</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="give">give</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>.</p><p> 原文：</p><p> <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>,<span word="One">One</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="argument">argument</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="orght">orght</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="distinguish">distinguish</span> <span word="right">right</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="wrong">wrong</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="human">human</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="well">well</span>.<span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="view">view</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="solely">solely</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="konwledges">konwledges</span>.<span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="paraguaphs">paraguaphs</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="discuss">discuss</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="argument">argument</span>.</p><p> <span word="First">First</span>,<span word="teaching">teaching</span> <span word="konwledges">konwledges</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="initial">initial</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>.<span word="they">they</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="student">student</span> <span word="learned">learned</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="konwledges">konwledges</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="methods">methods</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="studying">studying</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="primary">primary</span> <span word="school">school</span>,<span word="they">they</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="anything">anything</span> <span word="about">about</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="subjuct">subjuct</span>. <span word="A">A</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="ability">ability</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="guide">guide</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="attention">attention</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="increasingly">increasingly</span> <span word="paying">paying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="various">various</span> <span word="subject">subject</span>.</p><p> <span word="On">On</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="hand">hand</span>, <span word="apart">apart</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="knowledges">knowledges</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="skills">skills</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="necessary">necessary</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="taught">taught</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="realise">realise</span> <span word="everything">everything</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="society">society</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="teammork">teammork</span>,<span word="uderstanding">uderstanding</span> <span word="each">each</span> <span word="other">other</span>, <span word="helping">helping</span> <span word="someone">someone</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="she">she</span> <span word="needs">needs</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>,<span word="the">the</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="need">need</span> <span word="teach">teach</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="solre">solre</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problems">problems</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="meet">meet</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="face">face</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="difficult">difficult</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="forth">forth</span>.</p>
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