雅思考试写作中不该用的减分表达方式
<p> 大概说下自己的情况。我<span word="IELTS">IELTS</span>也是考了<span word="N">N</span>次，虽然最终过了，但是过得很勉强。所以决定在正式的<span word="MASTER">MASTER</span>上课前先读2个月的语言。目前已经上了2个星期的课，总体来说还是颇有些收获的。这2周内已经写了2篇<span word="IELTS">IELTS</span>作文，语言课程的老师从我们的<span word="ESSAY">ESSAY</span>中挑出了一堆毛病。把错误之处一一讲解给我们。个人觉得很有用，编辑出来给大家，希望大家能够从中受益。</p><p> 1。 <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span>/<span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span></p><p> 这对词组一般不要出现在<span word="academic">academic</span> <span word="essay">essay</span>中，考官已经看烦了。可以用<span word="A">A</span> <span word="considerable">considerable</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span>代替</p><p> 2。 <span word="Everything">Everything</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="sides">sides</span>/<span word="every">every</span> <span word="coin">coin</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="tow">tow</span> <span word="sides">sides</span></p><p> 说了跟没说一样，明显的事实，以后也不要用了</p><p> 3。 <span word="Recently">Recently</span></p><p> 这个词不好。按照他们的说法就是<span word="too">too</span> <span word="imprecise">imprecise</span>，没有一个具体的时间。可以用 <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="last">last</span> 5 <span word="years">years</span>/<span word="since">since</span>。代替</p><p> 4。 <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="survey">survey</span></p><p> 老师是这么说的:<span word="has">has</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="been">been</span>?/<span word="only">only</span> <span word="say">say</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="if">if</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="actually">actually</span> <span word="know">know</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="one">one</span> 也就是说考官知道这些都是你编的，最好不要用了</p><p> 5。 <span word="And">And</span>， <span word="because">because</span>， <span word="but">but</span></p><p> 这三个词我们还是经常会用到。其实最好用<span word="in">in</span> <span word="addition">addition</span>， <span word="therefore">therefore</span>， <span word="however">however</span>等代替</p><p> 6。 不能用<span word="vivid">vivid</span> 来形容<span word="world">world</span> <span word="vivid">vivid</span>可以用来说<span word="memories">memories</span>或者是<span word="dream">dream</span>之类的</p>
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