雅思考试高分作文欣赏及雅思满分获得者心得
<p> 题目：维护道路安全是否靠加强违章惩罚（该文在9月10日考试中获8分） <span word="Recent">Recent</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="witnessed">witnessed</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="worsening">worsening</span> <span word="trend">trend</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>. <span word="According">According</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="statistics">statistics</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="local">local</span> <span word="authority">authority</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2004 <span word="was">was</span> 20% <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="than">than</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="previous">previous</span> <span word="year">year</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="issue">issue</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="gaining">gaining</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="concern">concern</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span>, <span word="some">some</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="whom">whom</span> <span word="propose">propose</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="offenders">offenders</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="way">way</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="ensure">ensure</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="far">far</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="am">am</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="hold">hold</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="solution">solution</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="certainly">certainly</span> <span word="no">no</span> <span word="denying">denying</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="penalties">penalties</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="bring">bring</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="motorways">motorways</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="deterrent">deterrent</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="offences">offences</span>. <span word="Besides">Besides</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="government">government</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="enjoy">enjoy</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="greater">greater</span> <span word="revenue">revenue</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="severer">severer</span> <span word="fines">fines</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="conditions">conditions</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="shall">shall</span> <span word="never">never</span> <span word="overlook">overlook</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="side">side</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="coin">coin</span>: <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="downsides">downsides</span>. <span word="Fines">Fines</span>, <span word="as">as</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="common">common</span> <span word="penalty">penalty</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="violations">violations</span>, <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="instill">instill</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="misconception">misconception</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="money">money</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="pay">pay</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="guilt">guilt</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="resolve">resolve</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="problem">problem</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="result">result</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="can">can</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="cases">cases</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="offender">offender</span> <span word="commits">commits</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="same">same</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="another">another</span> <span word="mistake">mistake</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="fined">fined</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="spite">spite</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="heavier">heavier</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span>, <span word="road">road</span> <span word="safety">safety</span> <span word="cannot">cannot</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="enhanced">enhanced</span> <span word="unless">unless</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="equipped">equipped</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="sufficient">sufficient</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="knowledge">knowledge</span>. <span word="Recently">Recently</span> <span word="there">there</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="emerged">emerged</span> <span word="many">many</span> <span word="irresponsible">irresponsible</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="produced">produced</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="host">host</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="unqualified">unqualified</span> <span word="drivers">drivers</span>, <span word="contributing">contributing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="offences">offences</span>. <span word="Thus">Thus</span> <span word="tight">tight</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="testing">testing</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="needed">needed</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="improve">improve</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>. <span word="Furthermore">Furthermore</span>, <span word="advertisements">advertisements</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="campaigns">campaigns</span> <span word="concerned">concerned</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="launched">launched</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="raise">raise</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="fully">fully</span> <span word="aware">aware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="importance">importance</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="abiding">abiding</span> <span word="traffic">traffic</span> <span word="rules">rules</span>, <span word="accidents">accidents</span> <span word="may">may</span> <span word="hopefully">hopefully</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="eliminated">eliminated</span>. <span word="From">From</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="above">above</span> <span word="discussion">discussion</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="clear">clear</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="only">only</span> <span word="stricter">stricter</span> <span word="punishment">punishment</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="enough">enough</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="enhance">enhance</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="safety">safety</span>. <span word="Instead">Instead</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="hand">hand</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="closer">closer</span> <span word="control">control</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="testing">testing</span> <span word="system">system</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="well">well</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="higher">higher</span> <span word="public">public</span> <span word="awareness">awareness</span>.</p>
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