雅思写作技巧怎样使句子多样化
<p> 一篇好文章的条件很多。除了内容丰富和组织紧密之外，词汇的运用和句子的处理，也起着决定性作用。 句子可长可短，同一件事，可以用不同的句式表达。如果句子清一色是简单句，文章必定很单调乏味。如果全篇充满了冗长的复杂句，读起来也很费力。最好的方法是以简单句为基础，配合 适当的并列句和复杂句。简单句可长可短，通常要加些附属成分，如分词短语、介词短语、副词短语、不定式动词短语，以及节缩成分。 总之，作者可根据情况，使句子多样化，使文章灵活多姿。例如下列五个句子的基本概念一样，但是句式不同，内容重点也有些差别： <span word="The">The</span> <span word="goats">goats</span> <span word="grazed">grazed</span> <span word="peacefully">peacefully</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="unaware">unaware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="approaching">approaching</span> <span word="hunter">hunter</span>. +2) <span word="Grazing">Grazing</span> <span word="peacefully">peacefully</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goats">goats</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="unaware">unaware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="approaching">approaching</span> <span word="hunter">hunter</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goats">goats</span> <span word="grazed">grazed</span> <span word="peacefully">peacefully</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="unaware">unaware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="approaching">approaching</span> <span word="hunter">hunter</span>. - ) <span word="There">There</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="goats">goats</span> <span word="grazing">grazing</span> <span word="peacefully">peacefully</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>, <span word="unaware">unaware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="approaching">approaching</span> <span word="hunter">hunter</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="goats">goats</span> <span word="grazed">grazed</span> <span word="peacefully">peacefully</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="farm">farm</span>, <span word="they">they</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="unaware">unaware</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="approaching">approaching</span> <span word="hunter">hunter</span>. 和的句式最常见；如果加上其他三种互相交替，句子不是更多样化吗？ 最后，看看这两个句子要如何多样化呢？ <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>. <span word="He">He</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span> <span word="during">during</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilots">pilots</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="him">him</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="Extreme">Extreme</span> <span word="uneasiness">uneasiness</span> <span word="seized">seized</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="feeling">feeling</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="being">being</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="Being">Being</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span>, <span word="who">who</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span>/<span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="trainging">trainging</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="As">As</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="he">he</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. <span word="The">The</span> <span word="young">young</span> <span word="pilot">pilot</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="his">his</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="overseas">overseas</span> <span word="training">training</span>, <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="he">he</span> <span word="felt">felt</span> <span word="very">very</span> <span word="uneasy">uneasy</span>. 在上述12个句子中，-是简单句；是并列句；-是复杂句。简单句除和之外，其他五样，用的人并不多。人们最喜欢采用复杂句，尤其是和这两款；接着便是并列句。如果大多数人的句子只限于,, , 和这五种，而其他的则弃如敝屣，不是很可惜吗？ </p>
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