雅思写作8分范文：不同年龄段学生参加学习
<p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="charts">charts</span> <span word="below">below</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="among">among</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="amount">amount</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>.</p><p> <span word="Summarize">Summarize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="selecting">selecting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reporting">reporting</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="features">features</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="comparisons">comparisons</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span>.</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="charts">charts</span> <span word="respectively">respectively</span> <span word="indicate">indicate</span> <span word="why">why</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="groups">groups</span> <span word="decide">decide</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="how">how</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="have">have</span> <span word="received">received</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>.</p><p> <span word="Firstly">Firstly</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="age">age</span> 26 <span word="to">to</span> 39, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="considerations">considerations</span> <span word="reach">reach</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="as">as</span> 80% <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lower">lower</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="as">as</span> 50%. <span word="When">When</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="step">step</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="their">their</span> 40<span word="s">s</span>, <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="self">self</span>-<span word="motivation">motivation</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="declines">declines</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="out">out</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="rises">rises</span>. <span word="And">And</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="period">period</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="percentages">percentages</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="both">both</span> <span word="motivations">motivations</span> <span word="draw">draw</span> <span word="even">even</span> <span word="at">at</span> 40%. <span word="Starting">Starting</span> <span word="from">from</span> 49 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>, <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="career">career</span> <span word="fall">fall</span> <span word="dramatically">dramatically</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="less">less</span> <span word="than">than</span> 20% <span word="while">while</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="interest">interest</span> <span word="rise">rise</span> <span word="sharply">sharply</span> <span word="to">to</span> 70%.</p><p> 其次，在获得雇主资助方面，我们看到30-39岁是个明显的分水岭。之前，雇主给与的时间和资金方面的帮助最高占到了60%，而进入分水岭年龄段后，这些方面的资助下降到了30%，然后，随着年龄段的增长，比例又开始反弹，并在图表所示的最大年龄段里回升到了40%。</p><p> <span word="Secondly">Secondly</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="terms">terms</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="support">support</span> <span word="obtained">obtained</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="employers">employers</span>, <span word="we">we</span> <span word="see">see</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="period">period</span> <span word="of">of</span> 30-39 <span word="age">age</span> <span word="division">division</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="clear">clear</span>-<span word="cut">cut</span> <span word="dividing">dividing</span> <span word="line">line</span>. <span word="Before">Before</span> <span word="reaching">reaching</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="division">division</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="off">off</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="fees">fees</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="employers">employers</span> <span word="account">account</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="high">high</span> <span word="as">as</span> 60%. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="after">after</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="dividing">dividing</span> <span word="line">line</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sponsoring">sponsoring</span> <span word="drops">drops</span> <span word="to">to</span> 30% <span word="and">and</span> <span word="then">then</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="increase">increase</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="age">age</span>, <span word="this">this</span> <span word="percentage">percentage</span> <span word="begins">begins</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="climb">climb</span> <span word="again">again</span>, <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="to">to</span> 40% <span word="with">with</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="oldest">oldest</span> <span word="age">age</span> <span word="group">group</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="shown">shown</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chart">chart</span>.</p>
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