雅思剑八写作解析之三：解题技巧不变
<p> 3. 不变</p><p> 对于剑桥的每一套书的诞生，写作老师最大的快乐莫过于来自研究考官所给的满分作文！毕竟9分的雅思作文传递的就是考官在改卷评分过程中<span word="Care">Care</span>的！</p><p> 非常非常开心地发现，笔者在平时的教学中<span word="Care">Care</span>的<span word="Points">Points</span>考官的范文一次一次印证其准确性和实用性。</p><p> 最后笔者总结了一些亘古不变的解题技巧！</p><p> 从<span word="Task">Task</span>1讲起吧：剑八 162 页</p><p> 这篇9分的小作文最大的技巧莫过于其语法句型。</p><p> <span word="Globally">Globally</span>, 65% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="degradation">degradation</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="caused">caused</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="too">too</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="animal">animal</span> <span word="grazing">grazing</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="tree">tree</span> <span word="clearance">clearance</span>, <span word="constituting">constituting</span> 35% <span word="and">and</span> 30% <span word="respectively">respectively</span>.</p><p> 这一句同剑七的第四篇小作文 <span word="Page">Page</span> 168考官范文如出一辙：</p><p> <span word="Between">Between</span> <span word="these">these</span> <span word="years">years</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span> <span word="production">production</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> <span word="doubled">doubled</span>, <span word="rising">rising</span> <span word="from">from</span> 100 <span word="units">units</span> <span word="to">to</span> 170 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Australia">Australia</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="from">from</span> 90 <span word="to">to</span> 180 <span word="units">units</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="France">France</span>.</p><p> 还有 <span word="But">But</span> <span word="by">by</span> 2000 <span word="unclear">unclear</span> <span word="power">power</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="all">all</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Australia">Australia</span>, <span word="had">had</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="source">source</span>, <span word="producing">producing</span> <span word="almost">almost</span> 75% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="electricity">electricity</span>...</p><p> 这三句出自满分作文的句子都是 <span word="SVO">SVO</span>，<span word="Ving">Ving</span>....现在分词作伴状结构。</p><p> 我们再看看剑八162页的另外一句话吧：</p><p> <span word="These">These</span> <span word="causes">causes</span> <span word="affected">affected</span> <span word="different">different</span> <span word="regions">regions</span> <span word="differently">differently</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> 1990<span word="s">s</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="Europe">Europe</span> <span word="having">having</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="much">much</span> <span word="as">as</span> 9.8% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="degradation">degradation</span> <span word="due">due</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="deforestation">deforestation</span>, <span word="while">while</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="impact">impact</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Oceania">Oceania</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="North">North</span> <span word="America">America</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="minimal">minimal</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="only">only</span> 1.7% <span word="and">and</span> 0.2% <span word="of">of</span> <span word="land">land</span> <span word="affected">affected</span> <span word="respectively">respectively</span>.</p>
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