“烤鸭”必读：雅思如何避免“官腔”作文
<p> 雅思大作文考的是议论文，即考查考生是否能够在相对较短的时间内搜集论据，具体地论证自己的观点。但受国内教育体制的影响，中国考生往往缺乏对这些社会话题的深刻思考和讨论，造成思考模式的僵化与狭隘，因而论证非常空洞、缺乏说服力，写的太官腔。</p><p> 那么，应该如何对大作文进行有力的论证呢？最常用的方式就是解释和例证，几乎在每一篇雅思大作文中，都可以看见这两种论证方法的身影。</p><p> 下面关于<span word="work">work</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="study">study</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="home">home</span>的一段例证：</p><p> <span word="IBM">IBM</span>, <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="business">business</span> <span word="giants">giants</span>, <span word="has">has</span> <span word="saved">saved</span> <span word="nearly">nearly</span> 70 <span word="million">million</span> <span word="US">US</span> <span word="dollars">dollars</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="its">its</span> <span word="northeastern">northeastern</span> <span word="region">region</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="promoting">promoting</span> <span word="telecommuting">telecommuting</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="driving">driving</span> <span word="force">force</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="enterprises">enterprises</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="convert">convert</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="normal">normal</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="staff">staff</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="telecommuters">telecommuters</span>. <span word="Companies">Companies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="Japan">Japan</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="one">one</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="plan">plan</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="launch">launch</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="scheme">scheme</span> <span word="in">in</span> 2009, <span word="which">which</span>, <span word="in">in</span> <span word="turn">turn</span>, <span word="spiritually">spiritually</span> <span word="wins">wins</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="supports">supports</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="existing">existing</span> <span word="employees">employees</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="attracts">attracts</span> <span word="new">new</span> <span word="hires">hires</span>. 这段话中的2个例子都较好地完成了若员工选择在家上班，会对公司带来积极的作用这一证明。</p><p> 此外，提醒考生们需要注意的是，雅思大作文明确指出<span word="give">give</span> <span word="reasons">reasons</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="examples">examples</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>， 这里的<span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>和<span word="your">your</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>是完全不同的概念。前者是指通过个人的学习和总结而获得的经验，后者是指个人经历或周围某个个体的故事。如谈到<span word="working">working</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="produces">produces</span> <span word="better">better</span> <span word="results">results</span>， <span word="your">your</span> <span word="own">own</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>的例子一定是<span word="some">some</span> 3-<span word="year">year</span>-<span word="high">high</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="usually">usually</span> <span word="stay">stay</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="review">review</span> <span word="lessons">lessons</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="prepare">prepare</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="next">next</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="classes">classes</span>， 而<span word="your">your</span> <span word="personal">personal</span> <span word="experience">experience</span>的例子则应该是<span word="my">my</span> <span word="roommate">roommate</span>, <span word="Tony">Tony</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="always">always</span> <span word="been">been</span> <span word="working">working</span> <span word="hard">hard</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="studies">studies</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="staying">staying</span> <span word="up">up</span> <span word="late">late</span> <span word="every">every</span> <span word="night">night</span>， 不难看出两者的区别。故雅思大作文是不能使用个人案例的论据的，这一点与新托福的写作也是不同的。</p>
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