老龄烤鸭的G类雅思写作7分感想
<p> 下面雅思为大家整理了老龄烤鸭的<span word="G">G</span>类雅思写作7分感想，供考生们参考，以下是详细内容。</p><p> 天津<span word="G">G</span>类 <span word="L">L</span> 7 <span word="R">R</span>6. 5 <span word="W">W</span> 7 <span word="S">S</span> 6，虽然不是很理想，但还是满高兴的，因为我正好需要2个7分， 而且这是我第一次上战场。刚才看过一位鸭友的贴子，称自已为大龄考生，可我要是和他比起来就成了老龄考生了，因为我已近不惑了，嘿嘿!</p><p> 接到成绩后一直想写点什么，其实在这我最想谈的就是写作，因为这个7分实在出乎我意料之外，而且我平时几乎没怎么练，刚刚数了一下，我总计写过4篇大作，2篇小作，只是自已写写，没找过任何人修改。我分析了一下自已的情况，这次的7分主要归功于两方面：格式和字数。</p><p> 这次的写作题目是：<span word="many">many</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="buy">buy</span> <span word="lots">lots</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="expensive">expensive</span> <span word="toys">toys</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="keep">keep</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="busy">busy</span>. <span word="Children">Children</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span>. <span word="Whats">Whats</span> <span word="ur">ur</span> <span word="opinion">opinion</span>?</p><p> 1.格式方面</p><p> <span word="a">a</span>) 第一段我写了几句引言引出题目，同时表达了自已的观点.</p><p> <span word="b">b</span>) 第二段写了一些目前的情况，诸如人们越来越忙了，没时间多跟孩子在一起，所以他们买来许多贵重的玩具做为一种补偿，同时<span word="free">free</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="work">work</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="housework">housework</span>. <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="children">children</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="spend">spend</span> <span word="more">more</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="their">their</span> <span word="parents">parents</span> <span word="based">based</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="following">following</span> <span word="statements">statements</span>.</p>
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