薛鹏:2014雅思写作解析以及语料库
<p> <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="one">one</span>: <span word="line">line</span> <span word="chart">chart</span></p><p> <span word="Compare">Compare</span> <span word="UAS">UAS</span>, <span word="India">India</span> , <span word="china">china</span> <span word="south">south</span> <span word="Koreas">Koreas</span> <span word="population">population</span> <span word="living">living</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="towns">towns</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="cities">cities</span> <span word="since">since</span> 1970<span word="s">s</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="projection">projection</span> <span word="to">to</span> 2030.</p><p> <span word="Task">Task</span> <span word="two">two</span>: 科技类话题</p><p> <span word="Currently">Currently</span>, <span word="Every">Every</span> <span word="individual">individual</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="post">post</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span>, <span word="therefore">therefore</span>, <span word="most">most</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="Internet">Internet</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="possibly">possibly</span> <span word="inaccurate">inaccurate</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>? 现在,很多人可以在网络上发表信息, 因此, 大部分的网络信息是不准确的,你在多大程度上同意还是不同意这个观点?</p><p> 思路拓展:</p><p> 二段:可以让步观点的合理性行.</p><p> 的确,网络的发达在给人们带来方便的同时也带来了许多问题。其中虚假信息就是其中一种。很多网点出于牟取暴利的目的,发布欺骗性的和误导性的信息。许多产品的宣传充满了花哨的宣传语言和空洞的承诺. 网络商家缺乏诚信, 导致消费者在网络购物和网络交易的时候, 因为误信了虚假的宣传, 不仅经济上受损, 而且严重的情况下使用伪劣的产品或者药品可以威胁到人健康和生命.另外,有人出于哗众取宠或者是想出名的目的在贴吧或者论坛里发布虚假消息,威胁了社会的稳定。比如在日本地震的时候就有人散布盐荒的信息,导致人们大量抢购和囤积食用盐,结果给国家和民众都带来了损失。</p><p> 三段:反驳观点的不合理性</p>
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