雅思名师田伟伟：A类雅思写作范文
<p> <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="people">people</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="turn">turn</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="workers">workers</span>, <span word="rather">rather</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span>. <span word="To">To</span> <span word="what">what</span> <span word="extent">extent</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="agree">agree</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="disagree">disagree</span>?</p><p> <span word="Discussion">Discussion</span> <span word="with">with</span> <span word="regard">regard</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="chief">chief</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="has">has</span> <span word="constantly">constantly</span> <span word="aroused">aroused</span> <span word="peoples">peoples</span> <span word="attention">attention</span>. <span word="Some">Some</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="idea">idea</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="help">help</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="but">but</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="children">children</span> <span word="themselves">themselves</span>. <span word="Personally">Personally</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="oppose">oppose</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="idea">idea</span>.</p><p> <span word="It">It</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="commonly">commonly</span> <span word="shared">shared</span> <span word="convention">convention</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="function">function</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="largely">largely</span> <span word="lies">lies</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="quality">quality</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="probably">probably</span> <span word="afford">afford</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="students">students</span>. <span word="Such">Such</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="normally">normally</span> <span word="covers">covers</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="wide">wide</span> <span word="range">range</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="fields">fields</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="talents">talents</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="gifts">gifts</span> <span word="could">could</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="substantially">substantially</span> <span word="discovered">discovered</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="developed">developed</span> <span word="via">via</span> <span word="including">including</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="significant">significant</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="courses">courses</span>, <span word="such">such</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="literature">literature</span>, <span word="mathematics">mathematics</span>, <span word="biology">biology</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="chemistry">chemistry</span> <span word="so">so</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="granted">granted</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="courses">courses</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="most">most</span> <span word="interested">interested</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="whole">whole</span> <span word="process">process</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="In">In</span> <span word="other">other</span> <span word="words">words</span>, <span word="students">students</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="willing">willing</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="learn">learn</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="courses">courses</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="choose">choose</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="likely">likely</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="achievements">achievements</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="those">those</span> <span word="fields">fields</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="will">will</span> <span word="apparently">apparently</span> <span word="facilitate">facilitate</span> <span word="them">them</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="find">find</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="decent">decent</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="after">after</span> <span word="graduation">graduation</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="job">job</span> <span word="market">market</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="sizzling">sizzling</span> <span word="competition">competition</span>. <span word="Therefore">Therefore</span>, <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="education">education</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="as">as</span> <span word="individuals">individuals</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="evidently">evidently</span> <span word="erroneous">erroneous</span>.</p><p> <span word="However">However</span>, <span word="those">those</span> <span word="who">who</span> <span word="believe">believe</span> <span word="cultivating">cultivating</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="principal">principal</span> <span word="responsibility">responsibility</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="tend">tend</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="reasonable">reasonable</span>, <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="simple">simple</span> <span word="reason">reason</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="requires">requires</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="noble">noble</span> <span word="moral">moral</span> <span word="sentiment">sentiment</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="should">should</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="obtained">obtained</span> <span word="from">from</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="education">education</span>; <span word="while">while</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="worker">worker</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="demands">demands</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="professional">professional</span> <span word="skills">skills</span> <span word="related">related</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="area">area</span> <span word="they">they</span> <span word="are">are</span> <span word="specialized">specialized</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="would">would</span> <span word="also">also</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="offered">offered</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="education">education</span>. <span word="But">But</span> <span word="becoming">becoming</span> <span word="good">good</span> <span word="citizens">citizens</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="workers">workers</span> <span word="hardly">hardly</span> <span word="reaches">reaches</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="conclusion">conclusion</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="purpose">purpose</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="schools">schools</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="not">not</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="benefit">benefit</span> <span word="students">students</span> <span word="individually">individually</span>.</p>
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