2014年01月15日雅思写作分享
<p> 图表作文</p><p> 图表种类</p><p> 饼图</p><p> 图表<span word="instruction">instruction</span></p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="pie">pie</span> <span word="charts">charts</span> <span word="show">show</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="proportion">proportion</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="four">four</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span></p><p> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="major">major</span> <span word="road">road</span> <span word="bridge">bridge</span> <span word="in">in</span> 1965,1985 <span word="and">and</span> 2005 <span word="in">in</span> <span word="UK">UK</span>.</p><p> <span word="Summarize">Summarize</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="information">information</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="selecting">selecting</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="reporting">reporting</span></p><p> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="main">main</span> <span word="features">features</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="make">make</span> <span word="comparisons">comparisons</span> <span word="where">where</span> <span word="relevant">relevant</span>.</p><p> 图表要素回忆</p><p> 此次小作文沿袭前次考试仍然为饼图，说明了四种车型的通过比例：<span word="private">private</span> <span word="cars">cars</span>, <span word="public">public</span> <span word="transport">transport</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span>, <span word="lorries">lorries</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="commercial">commercial</span> <span word="vehicles">vehicles</span>.</p><p> 议论文</p><p> 话题类别</p><p> 工作类</p><p> 考题文字：</p><p> <span word="The">The</span> <span word="workplace">workplace</span> <span word="nowadays">nowadays</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="trying">trying</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="employ">employ</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="equal">equal</span></p><p> <span word="number">number</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="females">females</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="males">males</span>. <span word="Do">Do</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="think">think</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="positive">positive</span></p><p> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="negative">negative</span> <span word="trend">trend</span>?</p><p> 本次写作考试点评：</p><p> 饼图内容和2010年考试的内容相仿，涉及交通工具比例问题，需根据时间变化观察各个交通工具的比例增减情况，进行比较。总体来说较为简单。</p><p> 大作文工作类的辩论题目，这一趋势在2010年下半年已经凸显，考生应在今后考试中重视此类题目的准备。本题可根据具体情况进行两面分析：如这样做保证了男女在就业方面的平等，是社会进步的体现;但不考虑到具体岗位设置及性别差异，也会带来一些弊端。</p>
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