雅思口语论述中需要多提供细节信息
<p> 在雅思的<span word="part">part</span> 2部分话题中，考生需要就一个话题展开2分钟的论述。而之前的1分钟准备时间里，实际上考生只能够写下几个提示的信息点来帮助自己展开想表述的话题，无法做到写下大量信息而帮助自己照着所写的内容进行论述。因此，在2分钟的论述之中加入细节信息乃至例子都是很好的应对方法，即能够扩充内容和延长时间，又可以使自己的整体论述显得丰富有趣。</p><p> 我们可以把下面的口语话题作为范例：</p><p> <span word="Describe">Describe</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="school">school</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="attended">attended</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="child">child</span>.</p><p> <span word="Key">Key</span> <span word="points">points</span>: <span word="Kindergarten">Kindergarten</span>, <span word="many">many</span> <span word="children">children</span>, <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span>, <span word="learn">learn</span>.</p><p> <span word="Alright">Alright</span>,【口语表达方式】 <span word="Id">Id</span> <span word="like">like</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="tell">tell</span> <span word="you">you</span> <span word="about">about</span> 【比较自然的沟通方式】<span word="the">the</span> <span word="kindergarten">kindergarten</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="attended">attended</span> <span word="when">when</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="like">like</span> 3 <span word="or">or</span> 4 <span word="years">years</span> <span word="old">old</span>. <span word="Actually">Actually</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="first">first</span> <span word="day">day</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="school">school</span>, <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="terrified">terrified</span> <span word="coz">coz</span> 【口语用词】<span word="at">at</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="time">time</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="bit">bit</span> <span word="shy">shy</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="clingy">clingy</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mum">mum</span>. <span word="It">It</span> <span word="took">took</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="great">great</span> <span word="effort">effort</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="persuade">persuade</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kindergarten">kindergarten</span>.【比较鲜活的细节描述】 <span word="Believe">Believe</span> <span word="it">it</span> <span word="or">or</span> <span word="not">not</span>, <span word="it">it</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="place">place</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="two">two</span>-<span word="storey">storey</span> <span word="building">building</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="pretty">pretty</span> <span word="little">little</span> <span word="courtyard">courtyard</span>, <span word="which">which</span> <span word="is">is</span> <span word="an">an</span> <span word="ideal">ideal</span> <span word="spot">spot</span> <span word="for">for</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="do">do</span> <span word="some">some</span> <span word="exercise">exercise</span>.</p><p> <span word="Anyway">Anyway</span>, <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mum">mum</span> <span word="led">led</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="class">class</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="second">second</span> <span word="floor">floor</span>. <span word="There">There</span> <span word="were">were</span> <span word="two">two</span> <span word="teachers">teachers</span> <span word="and">and</span> <span word="about">about</span> 20 <span word="kids">kids</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="room">room</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="short">short</span>-<span word="haired">haired</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="looked">looked</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="into">into</span> <span word="the">the</span> <span word="eyes">eyes</span>, <span word="with">with</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="really">really</span> <span word="kind">kind</span> <span word="smile">smile</span> <span word="on">on</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="face">face</span>. <span word="I">I</span> <span word="used">used</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="be">be</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="intimidated">intimidated</span> <span word="by">by</span> <span word="strangers">strangers</span>, <span word="but">but</span> <span word="seeing">seeing</span> <span word="this">this</span> <span word="teacher">teacher</span> <span word="made">made</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="feel">feel</span> <span word="quite">quite</span> <span word="at">at</span> <span word="ease">ease</span>, 【详细的心理活动叙述也有助于使整体表述更加立体和生动】<span word="coz">coz</span>, <span word="you">you</span> <span word="know">know</span>, <span word="she">she</span> <span word="was">was</span> <span word="such">such</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="nice">nice</span> <span word="lady">lady</span>, <span word="and">and</span> <span word="I">I</span> <span word="liked">liked</span> <span word="her">her</span> <span word="immediately">immediately</span>. <span word="Who">Who</span> <span word="wouldnt">wouldnt</span>? 【反问的形式】<span word="So">So</span> <span word="luckily">luckily</span> <span word="my">my</span> <span word="mum">mum</span> <span word="didnt">didnt</span> <span word="go">go</span> <span word="through">through</span> <span word="a">a</span> <span word="lot">lot</span> <span word="of">of</span> <span word="trouble">trouble</span> <span word="to">to</span> <span word="let">let</span> <span word="me">me</span> <span word="settle">settle</span> <span word="down">down</span> <span word="in">in</span> <span word="that">that</span> <span word="class">class</span>.</p>
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